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AGE:
43
LOC: France
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 19
LOC: France
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 19
Producer (Ensuran Productions, ESP Music), composer-song writer, lyrics writer, and bass player with Ain’t No Dub, I am also a published author of poetry (in French), and currently finalizing a new bilingual poetry book (English and French) called A Journey to My Space.
The poems published here online are extracted from this new poetry book on progress.
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Women, With countless treasures, We want to read, hungrily, In your secret parchments Where are written our morrows Our hopes and our errancies Of an ink with indefinable colours Which draw labyrinths for our souls And plait silk threads for our bodies Women, Look at us, poor adventurers, Will-o'-the-wisp on cold gems Tossed about in your humid breath Candles in your sleek fingers You question us, always When we think we understand The sole harangue of your sweet flesh Under our passionate ca...
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At first sight, this is a good subject, America losing its original soul in the egotism and individualism... But regarding your allusions to "race", "nation", and "foreigners", I am afraid your are touching a non-sense. Or if not, only native americans (indians) can pretend to claim on this. Are you a native american? If not, you deny what you are in some way. Technically speaking, the poem flows correctly, direct and indirect rhyhming fine, stenza structure as well as end-stops too. The subj...
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