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AGE:
17
LOC: Overland Park, KS
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 31
LOC: Overland Park, KS
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 31
17, high school junior. love my job, my friends, and my music.
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She was a dark haired beauty, And he had light blue eyes. She knew the streets of the city, And he could spot a lie. He was a child of darkness, She’d been born into light. He found himself in his goodness, She’d hidden out of sight. He wasn’t as bad as he seemed to be, She wasn’t as bad as she’d been. He liked to dress oddly and play with fire, She liked to see him grin. They’d both been around the track, They’d both loved before. He’d heard a bit about her past, She hadn’t told him more. Th...
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A girl who couldn’t stand to know, The boy who wouldn’t let her go. Moments seeming out of place, The moment she knew she’d fallen from grace. Well here’s to the day you broke her heart And here’s to the time you’ve been apart. You’ll never ask and she’ll never tell You’ll never leave and she’ll stay in hell You’ll never look back and she’ll never admit You’ll never remember- she’ll try to forget. What did you do, and why, oh why, She hates that you could make her cry.
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She looks at you You want to say “it's different now” [you’re all the same] A dozen hands Just like yours Have touched her before [and everything blurs] This moment isn’t Yours anymore She thinks of another She loved before He’s never gone Though he left long ago You’re just a stand-in That she doesn’t know.
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Don’t play games I can play better Don’t try to tell me We’re perfect together I don’t have to trust And I don’t have to love You’ll never guess What I’m thinking of I’m wiser than you know And I’ll leave before I’m left Don’t try to blame me When you’re feeling bereft You started the games But I’m holding the cards I won’t make you leave But I’ll make this damn hard. Don’t play with me And don’t make me choose You’re playing to win But I never lose.
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Hey Grace What’s on your mind? Why are you you? Why are you kind? You’ve seen so much More than anyone should How are you here? How have you turned good? You’ve seen so much dark in your life You’ve felt the evil too Grace, I know you’ve seen the light And helped me to get through. How do you still stand today? You don’t know your power. By now, I’d have faded away But Grace, you’re a tower. You’ve helped so many people, Grace And I’d like to help you too You don’t let people see your face Or...
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This is ridiculous. Why even bother?
I enjoy the sentiments expressed in the piece, but the piece itself could use work. The individual lines don't connect as well as they could. It seems that they work best individually, and don't form a very coherent whole. The emotions expressed are relatable, however, and that's very good.
It would probably sound better phrased like "In order to create something that is considered normal, you must first accept that it will be abnormal". As is, the sentance structure is not paralell and doesn't make much sense.
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