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LOC: Chambersburg, PA
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LOC: Chambersburg, PA
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Sometimes I feel the loneliest when I'm surrounded by people, even people I know well... maybe It's just me, but the world's people don't seem to care about each other anymore
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Nothing is more chill than sitting in the 2D studio on top of one of the sturdier desks In the nighttime quiet and meditating on the six pictures I have tack to the wall trying to rationalize the one picture that really doesn't fit while listening to amazing bluegrass music that I never heard before but love and having a real conversation with a professor about whats on the wall without the tenseness there usually is because of underlying thoughts of people around I didn't even notice how muc...
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I think I've found the secret to life: Recreate the moments where you felt the magic before it left you. No one said the secret was ever easily attainable...
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hmm.. I really like this. I would love to see where this is headed. I love the way it tumbles but i don't know if that would get old real fast if this peice was longer. Some of the phrases are so descriptive when they are concise and just say so much with so little words. One of my favorites?: First-Edition Maya Angelou keeping the graphic novels company. It says so much about the character without saying much at all. Good Job :)
Seems like it could easily be a song... You have a spelling error in line 18, spelled "the" as "teh" I like it but I feel like the main idea could me more clear, right now it has alot of good parts but they don't seem to be well connected, or maybe it's just me :P
I like what you have so far, but it seems to move alone pretty fast, maybe slow it down a little bit, but not a lot. There are some lines that seem a little awkward when read but the intent of them come accross, just not clearly. One line is: " I arrived at the apartment after the endlessness of dream-time, and I suddenly felt…awake." I know what you ment but what you said, bit the part "endlessness of dream-time" comes accross very awkwardly and is very unclear in its meaning literally but t...
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