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AGE: 18
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 18

My name is LUTHER MARCEL CORAM and yes i don’t believe anything about me is lower case I’m bold I’m sincere ,and not afraid to tell you the truth if you have a poem and i comment before you pay for it just know i will be honest

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Humor/Satire / Just A Thought
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Why do we give teachers apples? Shouldn’t we be giving the “nerds” of our schools these apples? They are our future check signers.
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Humor/Satire / Just A Thought
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Why do we give teachers apples? Shouldn’t we be giving the “nerds” of our schools these apple’s? They are our future check signers.
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Quotes / Just A Thought
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Why do we give teachers apples? sholdn't we be giving the "nerds" of our schools these apple's? They are our future check signers.
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Prologue Hello all, I'm nobody important,so lets not bother with introductions. Lets just say that. I'm that one kid you cant put a name to. You think you know me, but you have no idea. And guess what, you're listening to me for a change. Because honestly you talk a little to much. Chapter 1 Why do we make fun of the smart kid in class, they are going to be our bosses in the next ten years. Shouldn't we be giving them apples and sharpening they're pencils. It was Monday again and I was trying...
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Short Story / my inspiriation
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my inspiration is to show the world the sweat and black of mt people was not in vain that my broken sisters have to be raped while my brothers stood by unmotionless while tears streamed down his face I will not fail ' i will not fail my inspiration is to show the world that the suffacation of my people in the journey to hell was not in vain that their skin was not pelted in vain i will not fail i will not fail no i will succeed in my life mission
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Poetry / Ashes
I feel as a poet you have great ideas you just have to make yor emotions more impactful and not as metaphorical
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Poetry / Why Is It?
beautifully written ad to the point you made some great points and agree and get all of them keep up the profound work
I have one critique and one praise for this poem first the critique why is it so short even though all poems aren't meant to be long one can't help but notice that something just seems missing like it's uncompleted. and now the praise the few word spoken spoke mountains and make up for the length a lil bit. Keep On writing!
Poetry / brain storm
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