black_neon's profile
AGE:
18
LOC: Winnetka, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 11
LOC: Winnetka, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 11
i love music. i love writing. i love making people laugh, but that’s mostly if you meet me in person. i don’t really read much poetry at all, i don’t think i could name a single poet. i read on this site for the credits, and because most of the time, on this site, it’s actually pretty good.
other then this i really have no idea what to say. if you want to talk to me message me for my aim or something.
my few favorite books (i don’t read much but i really wish i did.) include:
fear and loathing in las vegas
a clockwork orange.
there are no children here.
animal farm.
kurt cobain journals.
some of my favorite musical artists consist of:
a static lullaby.
afi.
alexisonfire.
as i lay dying.
atmosphere.
at the drive-in.
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I had just registered for my first semester freshman classes. The orientation took as long as most work days. The second we all crossed the street, walked up into the building we were lectured in for hours earlier in the day & picked up my ID, I was home free. "I like your headband." a voice from my side went through my ear and into my ego. She was a cutie. "Why thanks, apparently they threw them out for free at Pitchfork. I didn't go, but my friend got me one." I can't take a compliment. The...
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There once was a boy, who looked like a toy. He was more of a tool. He started to smoke, had spikes that poked attached to his clothes. "It represents everything I stand for!" he claimed He knew what he knew, blurted it out and told you. Performance art joke? Apparently ants are a rip off... He went to the institute of art He was going to be a photographer Forever given to the cause A starving artist on food stamps. Had a schedule till forty five. His house was clean while he was neurotic. Th...
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I'm just a poet who knows it Too good to show it Too slow to show off. Too late, show must go on! Trust me, I'm a doctor I've got a degree Got photoshop, Now I got three. Kick it up, throw down Moon lit sky scraper sunset showdown Chill out Get in love Fall in sane Its safe inside your mind Get ahead Take advantage Charge it to the card. Feeling better yet?
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Does time conspire, expire, or retire? Cross the line or start a fire? with hold answers to it's own questions? Give out, up, or in? Sneak-up and catch you in the act? Plan the end or play by ear? Does it even care or know it's own mystery? Can it tell me why the question mark curves? Can it hide you from the world if you play it right? As darkness receeds, comes in the light. This must be over. I think its time.
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Is the towel still flat when draped over the rack? Looking like a clock melting in the heat. I'd eat that raisin in the sun now Expire all the ways to bleed the colors off a violin. Imagine where it used to be in the tree. Wet with life in the side. I never told you I was a viola... What a sight to see! The script, behind the scenes of a dream.
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What you need to do is take the whole poem, keep it mostly the same, but try and change the words so it does not seem like normal speech anymore. "You were the stone-eyed queen with a cement tongue; " Can be expressed the same way with different words like so; Oh you, the stone eyed queen, you had that tongue of cement Or really a whole million other ways. Try to think of the way Yoda speaks backwards or how other launguages place their verbs nous and construct their sentences. Do not limit y...
You bring up a very extensive subject that has much to think about. You could even go into depth with a few more thinking about how we can imagine and space out 'silence' or 'time' in between events like during music or something of that nature. Nice for the six words though.
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