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AGE:
24
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 17
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 17
I am currently working full time as a Recruitment Consultant and have various hobbies that I am developing.
My work explores the combination of romance and sci fi/fantasy as i have to have a happy ending in my stories. It sounds cheesy I know but we all have our quirks. I hope to make all my characters a little different to the norm by adding an edge, making them an outkast or just on the point of no return. I’m weird in that in stories or films, I often want the bad guy to win (If he has a good cause). For example, in The Phantom of The Opera, even though the Phantom has killed, I couldnt help but want the herione to fall for him instead (I thought the other guy was pansy). Anyway you may find that i do favor a little darkness in my …
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CHAPTER TWO The trial had been adjourned. Jag was unable to continue with the disruption the female had caused. Both sides had been advised to remain within the Capital city under house arrest. That was over two hours ago. Following the woman’s return to unconsciousness and the manner in which she had appeared, the High Priestess, his sister had been summoned to advise of the meaning behind it all, as well as to help in the healing of the woman. Jag had discovered she had suffered a severe in...
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LONG SYNOPSIS A tragic accident tears away Myra’s only family, her mum and brother killed and leaving her in a coma to heal from the injury to her head. In an attempt to mend her broken soul and put the pieces of her broken life together again, Myra seeks the solace of Scotland hoping to reconnect to the world she was born to and avoiding the pitying glances that strangers throw her way. However, Fate has other plans in store for Myra, whisking her away to another realm in the hopes of healin...
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PROLOGUE It started like any other normal day. Raining. Quite normal for Scotland, Perth in general wasn’t known for bad weather but rather for the beautiful scenery. People seemed to forget the beauty of the landscape here, but this trip was like a pilgrimage, a homage to nature’s own beauty. Myra needed to try and find the beauty in the things that surrounded her. This holiday in her best friends lodge was about re-connecting to the world around her. Since the crash there seemed little to h...
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LONG SYNOPSIS A broken home leaves Myra grieving for the family she has lost and in a world that no longer feels like home. A tragic accident tore away her Mother and Brother and had left her in a coma to heal from the injury to her head. In an attempt to mend her broken soul and put the pieces of her broken life together again, Myra seeks the solace of the Scottish Isles hoping to reconnect to the world she was born to. However, Fate has other plans in store for Myra, whisking her away to an...
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really liked the conversation between the characters. ultimately captures the type cast for blokes in a blokes environment.
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Couldnt really relate to what this was about. Well constructed but lacks feeling for me
I cant give any constructive feedback other than to say that i thought it was good and i enjoyed it even if i didnt completely understand it. I wouldnt mind knowing more about the book.
To start off with a few small points, "very highly unusual", I would take very out and leave it as highly unusual. "An eye twitched, opened." Perhaps you should change this to a full stop after twitched? Ok in respect of being stuck i can entirely understand. My suggestion would be to continue the story and have an abstract lesson at the start of every chapter, kind of like a review where you go over what he has learnt. This breaks things down and you can fiddle with the order and put issues ...
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