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AGE: 54
LOC: Seattle, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 20

Pretty new to writing poetry but I enjoy it.  

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Quotes / Charity
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4 Reviews   0 Comments
Never expect anyone to be more chariatable, than you are.
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Poetry / The Box
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You've boxed me in Your four sided words conform Your one sided actions restrict Mind thinking in corners You've boxed me in
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Short Story / The Tree House
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Growing up in Iowa, held some wonderful memories for me, and some of those memories have become as magical now, as they were in my childhood. I recently took a trip back to my childhood home last summer. To see people that I havent seen in 35 years, since I was 14, is strange to say the least. Our house sat at the end of a long gravel drive, nestled between a modest urban sprawl and a farmers field. Behind the field was a tree line, that is a common sight in the midwest, offering the fields ...
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Non-fiction / Me and Marsha Lundy
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12 Reviews   13 Comments
I have a photograph of myself, when I was three, sitting on Marsha Lundy's lap. I was in black and white then, not only in the photo, but in the clarity of wrong and right. I don't remember Marsha Lundy, but, as far as my mother was concerned, Marsha was one of the greatest influences of my life. I followed her everywhere, she was my hope, my guiding light, my mentor. I don't remember, you, Marsha Lundy, but I feel enriched for having known you. But now I am grown, I wipe my own nose, my sho...
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Quotes / Good
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7 Reviews   0 Comments
If I had but one thing I could have in my life, just one single thing I could wish for, it would be good.
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Quotes / Echo
This is a great little thought who wants to be an audible mirror image anyways?
I liked the story overall, just a few nits. When spoeaking of the door jamb, for some reason that term bothered me. When I think of injury I think of flesh and bone not wood. Maybe damage would be a better word. I really liked the way described the problems and how he built them up, as I think we all have a habit of doing that. Our problems are as big as we make them and many are solved through discomfort. Good job on this
Flash Fiction / Alley Kat
Ow, this brought up some memories that were better left buried. I like your descriptions here. Sad but very effective, but I've heard that the needle is the vacation for the poor and desperate. Thanx for the read.
Quotes / Wind
Ha ha this made me laugh. Very cute
Poetry / Insomnia
This is a good start for a poem, but I would cut down on some of the abstractions and streamline this a bit. For instance, in L1 S2, instead of The pulse in my head continues............I would change to Pulses in my head continue....just to name one Anyways, this has a good write in there. Good luck to you.
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