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LOC: Redding, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 28
LOC: Redding, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 28
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It burnt Like liquid fire down my throat I gasped for air As my body warmed up instantly I liked my lips I never miss a drop Jack He’s my kind of guy I cant go a night without him Come to me Jack I said as I raised my glass Slammed another shot Tilting my head back Liquid fire Its just me and you Jack Another night Yet you comfort me As I cry heartfelt tears Or is that just the alcohol I cant tell anymore Five shots past All I see is Jack Take me away from here I need you One more shot Of liq...
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Will someone explain to me What I am doing wrong When will the answers Finally just come along This desperation act Is starting to get old I can feel my heart Begin to turn cold Walls are being built To guard my heart I fear what will happen If I don’t pull them apart I feel myself fading fast Disconnecting from life What will it take for me To put an end to this strife
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I fall to my knees in desperation This life of mine needs restoration I burn my candle down to the wick My mind is weak, my body sick I rest my head upon my hand No body cares to understand How a poets life brings me pain Yet in the end there’s much to gain I share my soul in the written word Praying some day it will be heard
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I now know what it is like To have something worth living for Worth dying for Worth doing what ever it takes Just to have once more It was an experience That will last forever And yet ended so quickly Leaving a pleasant taste Upon my still warm lips Please take me back To that moment in time When the only thing That seemed to exist Was our naked bodies Pressed against each other Give me that moment Just one more time So that I can know What is worth living for Worth dying for Worth giving all...
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Is this a real attempt at a quote? Because, it just seems like a sound of frustration!
That is a dangerous read, so erotic I must say. Especially for a single girl. I have had those dreams, maybe not as graphic, but the ones where you wake up wondering if it could have been real. Amazing writing, it is a challenge to find small things wrong with it when all you can do is picture what the words are describing.
It gives the storm an intimate form in my mind, all run from its protection and in the end you want to dance naked in the raid, feel the connection. At least that is what I read from it. Very unique poem, I love the rain myself and the majesty of the storm.
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