Fucking right. I like the biological look at anger. That shits cool. You just introduced me to it and made me appreciate it. Cheers yeah! G.T. Roe

Hell yeah. Fucking gnice piece, d00d(ette?). A little heavy on the business side without any action which normally I don't like... but the topic... the topic was keen. Right on. It makes me want to check out the rest of the shorts that make up this What If? book. My only criticism is that I have no idea why the internet is being shut down and there's alot of unanswered questions about the internetless world that I'm sure you answer in other segments of your collection. Hang ten, G.T. Roe

It was alright. I was wondering something sometimes what the monster itself is? But maybe it's best that I why why why wonder. Right on, G.T. Roe

Powerful words. It's not a topic I like to read about in poetry because of my extreme paranoia. Since these feelings are relatively common in me, it's easier for me to skim across this and NOT get really into it. But that's more a personal thing than any criticism to this peice... other than it doesn't taylor to absolutely everyone. Maybe not as powerfully to the extremely paranoid individual. G.T. Roe

You know what's corny? The title and the last line. It's just fucking corny. But the stuff in between the enormously rotten apples isn't that bad - just spoiled. G.T. Roe

I. This section made me light up a cigarette. Well done. II. I realized this was numbered and that first one wasn't an "i". I really like that idea.... short divisions in a short story. I didn't relate as well to the what's up comment but it didn't really bother the read much. III. Totally wanted to beat myself up after reading that paragraph... in a good way. IV. Skimmed. V. Ha. VI. Woah. VII. Kinda cheesy... but suprisingly done well.... I'm fucking loving this story at this point btw... it...

Haha. I'm not the only one who sucks.