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LAST LOGIN: September 24
LAST LOGIN: September 24
I love to write, lately every piece that I have come across has been about love. I believe when we write we express our emotions in the most beautiful way. I love to visualize things as if I had a picture of what I’m writing of. I would love feedback and any suggestions to help strengthen my works. thanks for taking time to read this and my work.
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I knew from the moment that you met me that you'd regret me, you'd resent me, you would forget me, I'm just a sweet memory waiting to be forgotten. everything you do, i do adore. but it always feels as if i'm being ignored. your mind is stuck in a time before, on a love that failed, that you can not restore I'm just a sweet memory waiting to be forgotten. You know that i tried. Behind these tears i cry I can see it in your eyes that all our love, our love is just a lie. I'm just a sweet memor...
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Wow, the suspense is really poured on there in the end.... After all that build up, it almost seems as the whole thing was more trouble than it was worth. But then again there are few experiences as dangerous as forbidden pleasures. Good piece :)
This is nice. It seems typical we lose ourselves but never realize the mistakes we are making, at the times we are making them. Humanity may not last forever, however our imprint will span across many layers of the Earth's history.
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