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AGE:
28
LOC: Broken Bow, NE
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 03
LOC: Broken Bow, NE
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 03
i just want people to read what I write, let me know both good and bad, I just recently broke a fear of having my works read by any one but me, so please take advantage, before my fears reingulf my psyche
also please excuse my spelling and other grammatical errors not at all my strong point, enjoy the works for what they are and what they make you feel… this is how i write it is not just words these are my emotions.. because of these errors sometimes you can feel the emotions put forth…
do not let this stand in the way of any corrective critisizm… i encourage it and want to know where i stand amongst poets…
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She is gone... out of sight out of veiw my angel is gone flew away on the wings I broke I am the angel of death I killed her heart ripped it straight from her beautiful breast I cannot hurt her again a relationship built on sand because I stole the rock as I walked she is gone...
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I did not expect...to live I did not expect...to leave the country I did not expect...to go to the city I did not expect...to get my hopes up I did not expect...to have my dreams taken away I did not expect...to ask questions I did not expect...to get answers I did not expect...to hurt I did not expect...to heal I did not expect...to lose a smile I did not expect...to find it again I did not expect...to give up I did not expect...to be givin up on I did not expect...to lose trust I did not ex...
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SOLDIER SUPPORT PRAYER... SOLDIER BE CALM SOLDIER HAVE PEACE COME HOME A HOT MEAL TO EAT SOLDIER PROTECT SOLDIER BE SAFE COME HOME A SMILE ON YOUR FACE SOLDIER BE STILL SOLDIER YOU WILL COME HOME NO NEED FOR A PILL SOLDIER KEEP MARCHING SOLDIER KEEP CHARGEING COME HOME BODY AND MIND FULLY FUNCTIONING SOLDIER FIGHT HARD SOLDIER WITH HEART COME HOME WITH A BRAND NEW START SOLDIER WE SUPPORT YOU SOLDIER WE ARE HERE COME HOME SOLDIER AN ANSWER TO OUR PRAYER
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it came on so fast, i could not see the answers that were in front of me i stood up tall, it made it worse i bent down low, still had to curse walking, and walking for miles and miles trying to find what was hinding as it started to clear still my only fear hope not to be match, set out of the fog, that odd day still standing proud and went on my way
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it swept over him just like the sea during an earthquake... tsunami his blue eyes when black and rolled back in his head the doctor spoke the time he was pronounced dead in times of sorrow you see nothing only grief it gulfs, swollows tide on a great reaf the time will come and time will go from here on out decide... to lead or follow you cannot change time if only we could as easy as this rythme spend your days of glee not waisting a moment do not let the memories flee or you to my friend wi...
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I cannot waite for chapter 3, i now have to find chapter 1, you are great with expression and giving your characters personality, consistant personality, also very funny for what is to be supposed drama, am not sure of course not reading the 1st chapter. Am looking forward to the rest of the novel. kudos to you, you have something here... GOOD LUCK... let me know when you release the next chapter...!!!??
This one has touched me, my Dad is fighting cancer. Your words have given me a new outlook on grief. Kudos to you I believe poetry should make the reader feel his/her emotion, this one has stirred me in such away, I am no longer andry that I am going to lose my father. You are very talented, this will get recognition!
kudos, love it, i have the same feelings, alot of the time, you have alot of tallant, it truly humbles me, we are on the same page
you cannot put true feelings into words without truth and that is exactly what this is truth i felt as if you wrote to me, extrodinary, very pure, kudos
wow... pain is always a motivator, you have talent, if you do not mind me making a suggestion revise in a more true form, it reads more like a letter, but again this is only my opinion, also if someone is going to hurt you this much they weren't worth it anyway, no one who truly cares of someone else acts like that
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