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Free: Magic cat and 5 mildly retarded kittens Several months ago I so generously took in a stray cat. Unbeknownst to me, this was a magic cat. Several nights into her stay she performed a trick, she multiplied. Unfortunately magic cats are nothing like magic rabbits- you can put the rabbit back in the hat, but you can not put the offspring back in the cat. Now I have one magic cat and 5 mildly retarded kittens. The cat: This magic cat performs more than one trick. Not only does she expertly ...
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2 Reviews   0 Comments
standing on a precipice   yet to have fell   on one side is heaven   on the other is hell   flesh wounds seeping   from the point of a knife   balancing unsteadily   on the weapon of life   the ancients of past   they rest on one knee   their cries ring upward   “join we. join we”   lustful eyes stare   thirst proving fierce   they long for the soul   of the one who is pierced   that stands on a precip...
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Poetry / Lies
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Don't think I believe everything you say When I smile and walk away Your excuses hold no merit with me I, too, can tell stories and make-believe Webs of lies woven strong By the words that roll off your tongue Half-truths, tall tales, and total fiction That you say with such conviction Fabrications and dis-illusions Causing such a mass confusion Nothing is as it seems Call it a nightmare, call it a dream Trust is gone and hope is dead From all your lies swimming in my head Poisoning my sould,...
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Poetry / Untitled 6
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2 Reviews   0 Comments
I say go Here you stay I say stay You walk away I say yes You say no 'Round and 'round Again we go Try to compromise You aren't willing With your lies My head is filling Distorted reality Fiction or fact? Real or fake? I over-react Am I crazy Or am I right? Do I leave Or stay and fight? So many questions So much confusion Are you real Or just an illusion? Too good to be true You probably are Maybe I have taken this Way too far Need some distance Need my space In your life I have no pla...
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Poetry / Panic
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3 Reviews   1 Comment
Panic stricken Full of fear Unable to Shed a tear Can't breathe Heart is racing Head is spinning Feet are pacing Bottled up Emotions raging From reality Dis-engaging Shut down Can't cope Have lost All hope Overwhelming Sense of dread Emotionally Now dead  
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Humor/Satire / Art of Nose Picking
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Humor/Satire / Just A Thought
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Humor/Satire / Magic Show
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Humor/Satire / Very Like a Politician
I never really paid much attention to politics except for the big stories that are plastered so much on the television that you can't help but to be forcefully informed. This, however, was very entertaining. Easily read for the politically ignorant like myself. Maybe they should start broadcasting the news in limericks, it would make it that much more interesting. On Beauty Queen VP Hopefuls and Gratuitous Racism No Doubt were my favorites. Late night vicodin trips bode well for you.
Romance / Essay
"The sound of his voice engulfs all others coming from somewhere deep within his chest." -This line is a bit unclear. Either add in a ; between others and coming or reword it so that it doesn't sound like he has multiple voices coming from within him. "...seems to shelter me from trials and harshness of the world..." -may consider changing to 'the trials and harshness' "People will find the one that will treat them well, and that will make your life whole." -You went from the plural 'people' ...
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