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AGE: 20
LOC: Lansing, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 11

My name is LauRen, and I’m a Highschool Sr. To learn more about me, head to my blog. http://call-me-what-u-will.blogspot.com
if you do choose to comment or review my work, could you please do so nicely as possible?? thanks, that would be very much appreciated!

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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / I must've pissed off a leprerechaun or two
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Because last week--especially Monday--was insane. Either Saturday or Sunday night I got an instant message from Freak Boy (that’s right, we’re back to that nick name. If you don’t like it, oh well, didn’t nobody ask you to come and read my blog) telling me that he was finally coming to see me on Monday. I asked him straight up if he was sure because if you only knew how many times I had heard that shit since July you would’ve been a little bit skeptical too. He assured me that he was forreal....
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Day Two Tuesday Okay Robyn, I don't know how well you'll be able to grade this assignment when I'm in jail. Either you will have to visit me, or I'll mail it to you because I feel as though I will be spending a little bit of time in a Jail cell some time soon. You may be asking yourself why I think I'm going to jail, simply put, the answer is this: niggas. No, not boys, young men or even black people in general, but niggas. There is a distinct difference between me calling someone 'my nigga' ...
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Poetry / Rico
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You said you loved me and I told you the same It was all just part of your game Guess you could say that my heart's to blame It betrayed me and you did the same After all the pain and heartache I've been through How is it I cansay that I still love you You said I was different and I thought you were too I've never met a man quite like you I actually believed everything you told me There aren't many I can say that to You made me feel beautiful and you made me feel loved You made me smile when ...
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Day Five Friday Just _what_ was I thinking yesterday when I told Mo that I would go with her to get Michael? Sure, when I met him I was glad that I did, but the drama that ensued after the fact? Yeah, could've gone without it. When I got in the car this morning, Mo would just not shut up about Mike. "Michael said _this_, Michael said _that_" _Rae says gag me with a spoon. Twice._ She was so busy giving me a blow by blow account of their first conversation that she completely ignored my requ...
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Monday Day One, So… a diary huh? I guess it’s okay, just as long as you don’t show it to the ‘rents or anyone else, I can deal. RaeDey* ********** Tuesday Day Two, I’m sitting here, bored out of my mind in Advisory, mad that I left my phone in my locker so I can’t play a mind numbing game of “Frogger” until the bell rings for dismissal to first hour in twenty minutes, where I will most likely die of tedium. That’s only until I can get to third hour—stupid block scheduling—and be stuck in a ro...
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Short Story / The All Star
The first thing that I was struck by was the amazing imagery, I almost felt as though I was at the sports complex while it was getting darker, I almost needed a jacket. I don't even like baseball, but this story got me hooked, I wanted to find out what happened next. To be constructively critical, I would've italicized James' thoughts just to make it easier for the reader to tell that whats being said is happening in his mind, but thats the only thing I can think of to point out. This is a go...
By the time you had gotten to your friend 'Goose' it had sounded like a zoo, but when Bluejay and Earthworm came along it was just a bit too much, lol. I loved this, the only thing is that you could've given a bit more detail, like, how did you feel when she told you to get out of her life, what (maybe who, like Penguin or whoever) did you do, what were you doing when your friend called you that night. This was one of the most entertaining things I've read in a while
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Young Adult / Temptation
every time I read this I get sucked in and I HATE it! I want to know what's going to happen between Sin and Temptation (btw, did I ever tell you that I absolutely love the names?) and the rest of the family. I mean, is the baby REALLY Rez's, or is that hoe just saying that it is so she can get a little bit of the families wealth? As a matter of fact, is she really pregnant? And if she is I hope the baby is a boy too. Now on to Miss Sin... you did a really good job of creating a character that...