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The day when your 3 abortions Will be considered murder: Brought to you by The moral palettes Who like their Arabs Cajun, And want planetary brakes To still feminism’s squealing wheel. Liberating a sex That would march 40 million Least-of-mine-munchkins to a salty grave, Should never get out Of patriarchy alive…
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Poetry / Poem for a Folly
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There croaked my wherewithal When dames went Henry Ford And they were all, like, All alike. What’s a miser of the past? Answer: poverty and stupidity. Retarded woman Have dim fashion sense, Redneck wardrobes Breach the velvet performance Of celebrity appearance With thrift market collages. The pot-bellied poor Resist the waistline Of homosexual visionaries. Televangelist Use bad wigs And scary ties To bring down-folk Up to speed on the dignity Of high tech thievery. Failure Is to homogenous f...
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Short Story / A Tight Connection
That's what I call supporting the troops! I suspect you've been told about the misspellings; I'll spare you that and just give my general impressions. "It amazed me, that the simple fact that the people I spent the most time with I really did not know." This could easily be shortened too "It amazed me that the people I spent..." There are several of these sentences throughout the piece, where it feels strained with extraneous words, almost as if you were padding the piece. The story seems to ...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / D.C. Madam
Most of your point is well taken; however, you might consider the libertarian argument as well: 1). When no coercion is involved, no crime is committed; 2)Every desire that is made illegal, creates another black market... Instead of capital letter to emphasize, you might want to italicize, as the big/ small juxtaposition of lettering is rather irritating on the eye. Randall Tobias was a big Eli Lilly president here in Indianapolis as well. Better to sell just your body than your country eh?
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