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AGE: 52
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 15

Born June 23, 1957, in North Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada, Peter Kent was predestined to be a thrillseeker and adrenaline addict. As a young child, raised along the banks of the often treacherous Seymour River, he was shooting rapids and climbing the highest trees available, then letting himself fall through the branches to the ground, or pedaling his bicycle across planks placed 12 feet atop the family’s laurel hedge to get the desired adrenaline rush, usually resulting in lacerations and stitches.

On another occasion he tried to extract his own loose teeth with a hammer in the family garage. At six years of age his parents divorced and he moved to New Jersey with his mother, a move responsible for the dual Canadian-US citizen…

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Screenplay / The Catch
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"The Catch" The SOUND of rambunctious CHILDREN’S, giddy LAUGHTER ECHOES. SUPERIMPOSED ON A BLACK SCREEN: “THE WHITE MAN MUST LEARN THE UNSPOKEN LANGUAGE OF THE SPIRIT” FADE UP: EXT. SCHOOLYARD - DAY CHILDREN of ALL RACES PLAY together at THE SANDBOX, SWING SET and TEETER TOTTER, circa 1960. Perfect harmony. Childish Innocence. A GREGARIOUS BOY (TONY STRAND @ 6) Darts through the SWINGS SET, pushing his FRIENDS, a CHINESE GIRL and a BLACK BOY - DEWEY. Pealing laughter’s infectious. DEWEY Push...
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Screenplay / La Classa Nostra 1-3
Sorry, i know this shit hurts, critiques always do - I've been a screenwriter for 20 years, both in and out of Hollywood, and one thing I know to be an axiom - "Never release your material until it's ready" To ANYONE!! This might be a good bit of work, but it needs more time on the characters, better flesh and background on them, and a much thicker storyline. The scenes run too long, so the dialiogue, (NOT GOOD - two lines per is best) and it needs direction. Break it down into the acts, what...
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