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AGE:
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LOC: Las Vegas, NV
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 02
LOC: Las Vegas, NV
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 02
I am a Freelance Writer and Internet Marketer from Las Vegas. Nv. I am very concerned with the number of people who are struggling with depression and anxiety in our society. To that end, my articles are directed primarily to encourage and inspire people to find the potential within ther own lives, and in so doing, to be able to inspire others to do great things.
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Alone and rejected once more, I sit reflecting on the images of my life! Countless times have I offered my heart, only to see it tossed upon the trash heap! I risk because I'm searching, seeking for my kindred heart! I have often felt a glimmer of hope, as some would tease with faint praise! But the reality of it all, to them my heart seems a toy! A trinket to play with, a brief distraction for their life! I am an amusement, like a clown in a circus! Over and Over I give my all, and time aft...
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I'm the good guy that every woman talks about finding, and always ignores. I'm the guy who defends your honor, only to see you walk away with someone else. I'm the guy who would give you the world, just so I could see you smile. I'm the shy guy in the corner of the room, wishing you would talk to me. I'm the guy who gets mad as hell, when someone mistreats you. I'm the guy who still opens the door for you, no matter what others say about it. I'm the guy who would give you the coat off my bac...
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1.Protecting Your Possessions: Unfortunately, not everyone comes to Las Vegas for a simple vacation like many folks. Vegas is known for attracting not only tourists, but also those people who would like to separate you from your money. Here is a short list of things to watch for: Do not leave handbags or purses laying on the ground or the next seat when you are gambling. Thieves are getting braver every day. They don't hide in the shadows anymore. They will walk right past you and take your b...
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Have you ever wondered what made other people successful? Do you wish you knew what they know? "Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any one thing." Abraham Lincoln. How do you measure success? By what standard can we know that we have actually achieved it? If you were to ask one hundred people what success is , you would get a hundred different answers. It is possible that many of the answers would center around the same idea, but each would have th...
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You have done a very good job of describing not only the helplessness and frailty of human beings but also the way people often react to those in need of help. Society often is not interested in why this person is in the condition they are. They only see the condition and make judgements from there. I like the way you tied it together with the sentence which began the poem. I truly wouldn't change a thing. Good job.
Very nice description of the agony of dying love. You have shown the feelings of one who is trn between leaving for the good of the one she loved and the longing that things could be different. One paragraph however doesn't quite fit though, or maybe this is what you intended. Throughout the poem you describe the primaries desire to break all ties and have the secondary figure forget all about her. But there is one paragraph in which you say "with this letter I seal a tiny yet healthy rose. T...
Very nice use of illustrative words. I can easily visualize te images you are speaking of. The only thing I would change is to break up the sentences. Maybe put breaks in between every one or two sentences. This will make it easier to read, and will allow the reader to digest it in smaller bits. But overall, great poem.
You have a very nice style with your words. Great use of visualization techniques. You break up the sentences perfectly. Really I wouldn't change anything. Nice job.
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