carmenalegria's profile
AGE:
25
LOC: Stone Mountain, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 08
LOC: Stone Mountain, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 08
I am my writing, nothing more, nothing less. I am only as good a person as my writing, so it varies piece by piece. I enjoy reading graphic novels and comics. My favorite series as of yet is Strangers In Paradise by Terry Moore. I guess if you want to know anything else, check my myspace: myspace.com/carmen_alegria
Well, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Respect,
Carmen
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How you doing, mama? won't you come out and play with me? After fourteen years, don't you have something to say to me? Like maybe I love you and I'm sorry I locked you up and threw away the key? What the fuck, bitch did you just slam the door in my face you E vil whore bitch let me in take a seat cause you won't be leaving just to be sure i brought some duct tape cause I don't want you screaming you might want to quiet down cause I'm posessed by some demons and if you keep on trying to fight ...
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My What If I still recall what you were wearing And the way you just kept staring The fisrt day we met Funny how a simple game of pool Both of us trying to play it cool Turned into something I'll never forget We were young and full of passion But i never would have imagined That my heart would never let your mem'ry go If fate wasn't so damned cruel I wouldn't feel like such a fool For the fact that I still love you so Hook~ My "what if" My fairytale romance My could-have-been lover But we nev...
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~Hook~ The best dreams I've had of you Were the dreams where you were dead Dreams in which I beat you With the hateful things you've said I watched you lay there dying And at last I felt avenged For all the ways you hurt me For the blows from which I cringed You never said "I'm sorry" But that it was my fault Yet somehow I've surprised you With the havoc i have wrought You called yourself my mother But acted like my owner You call me your worst mistake I call you my egg donor V.1 the demons t...
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Surrender- A Vampire Open Mic Descriptions Tyra-- pale skin, long, dark brown hair, blue-eyed, short, and curvy. She is dressed in a snug black top, a long skirt with a split up the side, and high-heeled sandals with the sexy little straps that buckle midway up her calf. Cameron--tanned, black-haired, dark-eyed, tall, slim build. He is wearing a long, black trench coat, a white long-sleeved shirt, and black slacks. PAGE 1 PANEL 1 STREET (Note: all of the CAPTIONS are spoken by TYRA) Caption: ...
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The club was packed out when I got there. A live band was playing, and everyone was dancing, drinks in hand. It was just the thing I needed to help me forget that tomorrow, I would be going back to a monotonous existence in the average world of Atlanta, and all of the pressures of a job I hated. This trip to Jamaica was the best thing that job had done for me in years. So I was determined to enjoy this trip as much as I possibly could before tomorrow's dawn called me back to reality. I went t...
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I loved this piece. I think it would be great if you could put together a book of such poetry. It speaks so subtly of growing up and conquering your fears to be the kind of parent you need to be for your kids. I loved it, from start to finish.
I think this story should not have ended just there. I found Lady Ridley to be an interesting character, and was sincerely looking forward to meeting her soon-to-be daughter-in-law. i think you should add a little more, but other than that, the story was quite charming. I would hope that you will expand a little more on the characters of Henery and meerut. There was one thing about the flow of your story that did not agree with me. At one point, you change perspective. From the beginning of t...
Sounds like a very good opening. If you were to use this as an intro to a novel, I think that would prove to be an entertaining read. One suggestion I would make is that there seems to be something missing from the time you left the curb and when you flew into the canyon. I do look forward to reading more from you.
First of all let me say that this story was gripping. Funny? Yes, very. Well-written? Absolutely. I loved the main character form the introduction, and was so captivated that I didn't even have time to take notes until I was done reading it the first time. I am assuming that there will be more to this story forthcoming. I look forward to reading more from you.
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