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AGE: 55
LOC: Saint Louis, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 31

I’m Catluckey and looking forward to being published. Serious and with only a short amount of time, I need readers, writers who’d want to jump in on this rollercoaster ride titled The Watchman.

What I need? Grammar, conent, scientific/character believability, and whether or not you nodd to each installment.

If you got a name, game, slant or chance, come on over and experience The Watchman. And thank you for all your help, participation, and (hey, why not) FUN!

Oh, the guy in the profile is the “real” watchman, Teeabu, illustrated by me. He’s one of the protagonists. Just to give a little taste of what’s in store. Come aboard and and fly on my ship. Let’s be friends.

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Captured (Leptis, Le-Yetal, Delah) Ch 1.2c
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6 Reviews   11 Comments
Chapter 9 – The Captured (chapter 1.2c--Leptis, Le-Yetal, Delah) Leptis coughed as she sucked in smoke while sprinting through the burning rows of cornfield. Fire licked near her robes, arms, and feet as she dashed between the flames. Like a monster, the flames spread, devouring row after row of the crops. The landscape became a sore of destruction behind her. Fields of cornstalks smoldered. Blackened trees littered the land. The most shocking to Leptis were the dark clouds that billowe...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Retraction Team (Irema Attack) Ch1.2b
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14 Reviews   25 Comments
The sky shattered as Scout One and five other Araidian ships entered Irema. A blast of energy cracked through the hull of the ship while Commander Le-Yetal squeezed the arm holds and braced against the force that pressed him into his chair. He watched the view screen while the five other scout ships huddled, with Scout One in the center. The ships broke apart, causing a white ring to appear, then fade into nothing. The scouts flew in six different directions to Irema’s Dome, village, an...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Retraction Team (Irema Attack) Ch1.2b
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19 Reviews   31 Comments
The atmosphere exploded, a white ring circled their scout ships then disappeared when they separated six ways. Commander Le-Yetal paced on the steel grating, boots clanking, heightening his nerves. With hands clasped behind his back, he frowned in deep thought. He had been instructed to present this aerial space show for Araidia, a semblance of their pride and strength. He would not have opted for this pompous display. With a margin of two hours to coral these slaves gave them little time bef...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Captured (Teeabu, Hydro-lift, & Delah Attacked) Ch 1.2
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7 Reviews   44 Comments
Teeabu leaped into the gray two-seater hydro-lift with the canopy down, parked in the four-column port attached to their home. He jammed the card-key into a small slot to the right of the steering gear. He stepped on the throttle and gripped the wheel. It wasn’t long before steam ejected from the chassis and the engine hummed. Teeabu backed out of the drive port and sped down the road. He bit his lip and patted the dashboard while listening to fast music that pushed him on. His long sin...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Watchman-Query Ltr & 1st Chapter
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Feel Free To Review. THERE'S NO TIME LIMIT. I've already submitted another version of this to LJK Literary Management. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- November 9, 2008 Catherine D. Hubbard 840 Holland Avenue Webster Groves, MO 63119 catluckey@hotmail.com 314-962-1197 Mr. Laurence J. Kirshbaum LJK Literary Management, LLC 708 3rd Avenue, 16th Floor New York, NY 10017 Dear Mr. Kirshbaum: The Watchman is a 115,000-word scien...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Into The Master's Lair - Chapter Twenty-Six and Recaps
by SwordMistress
“Whatever it %{color:blue}is,(comma)% we will face it together.” No matter how much we fear for each %{color:blue}other,(comma)% we -2- After grabbing a quick bite to %{color:blue}eat,(comma)% Lauriana -3- Once we enter the %{color:blue}pass,(comma)% we will The Master’s %{color:blue}realm.(period) We% will need -6- “You two weren’t talking about %{color:blue}me,(comma)% were you?” -7- Despite what they were about to %{color:blue}face,(comma)% they -8- such a beautiful night with a million st...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Into The Master's Lair - Chapter Twenty-Five and Recaps
by SwordMistress
Another chapter to the saga of L&M. I've thoroughly enjoyed this exciting installment. Thank you so much for sharing your talent. -1- The mountain was full of precious stones, but he had little use for gems. (This took me out of the story. Is there a reason why the mountains, precious stones, and little use of gems is so important as he details the osbidian throne?) %{color:blue}Soon,(comma)% he would have everything he wanted. -3- I am sure if something had gone %{color:blue}wrong,(comma)% w...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Into The Master's Lair - Chapter Twenty-Four and Recaps
by SwordMistress
This was great. And I loved your cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what happens to Lauriana. You've had some powerful scenes in here. And Lauriana against Hector is not to be missed. Excellent job. -1- Hmmm, Zeke thought, lacking...(Go ahead and put this on a separate line.) -2- ...gripped the nearest branch in(on) the Pine tree he sat in(on) to keep (This is confusing, might want to clarify, bring in more detail. How can he perch in a Pine tree?) pack and %{color:blue}began to wrap(wrapped)% ar...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Flashbacks Chapter 1
by SSXPenguinX
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Plastic Craft-Chapter 11 with Recap
by FrakKevin
This is an interesting development. You're very imaginative. I just have a small gripe. It does sound a tad unrealistic for the agent to give Grady a hug and thank him for saving his life. It doesn't sound like an agent would do this. They're more hard core, aren't they? Even if this one shrunk from his duty. Maybe you need to explain why this guy is a softie.Here's a few fixies. ...to fly this plane, along with an %{color:blue}agent.(period) The% President‘s daughter is also on board.” As we...
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