words are how you mean them, how you express them, how you deliver them. the most meaningful "i love yous" are the ones that go unsaid. tender embraces, longing stares, powerful understandings, but often there is so much in the way of love that makes those most meaningful expressions difficult or impossible. distance, fear, pain sadness and means all play a role in not only love, but simply its expression or admission. often getting a candy gram out to a troop overseas, or a grocery store hal...

this poem makes me happy. its so honest. there is a reflective understanding of your own state of mind that reminds me of who i am when i do my best work. i think this is very well written. wonderfully, you have captured a very intangible state with your words. great writing.

wow. this one just kept making me say wow. from the begiing i was epecting a novel, and then it just kept speeding up. i think what you have written is good, but from the park to the shower, to the bed and then to eternity that quickly is quite the shift. give the reader a little more time to soak it all in. i want more at the park, why did they go straight to her apt? what did he/she say or do? from the shower to the bed, why make that transition? it feels like hot steamy sex straight to lon...

this is beautiful. Very sad but beautiful. I hope that's not how you still feel. Very well written.

its good. "..castle.. whos king.." doesnt follow perfectly to me, but its just an opinion. nice.

"this is the color of friendship.." i love that. and the smell of a taco bell parking lot made me smile ear to ear. I like the style in which you write. Melancholy but optimistic, and very smooth. From time to time i think there is a little overkill with description, but its not a glaring downside. is there any way to extend your pieces? they feel like brilliant images to what could be a much greater journey. i like this, and i love the title.

i like it in contrast to the title, but as a whole its not very inspiring. Even when taking into account the limit of words. I think the point could be equally well established with diseases of shorter names.

That was spectacular. Definately going on my favorite list. ".. and the air become anorexic from tension" is a wonderful line. full of great lines. i honestly wouldnt change a thing.