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AGE:
28
LOC: Erie, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 15
LOC: Erie, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 15
HEY ITS CHARISMA STYLES UP AND COMING AUTHOR. I’M ON A MISSION AND I’M DESTINED TO BE GREAT BY THE GRACE OF GOD.
I DON’T HAVE TIME TO PULL ANY STOPS I’M GOING FULL SPEED AHEAD.
BORN AND RAISED ON THE STREETS OF DETROIT.
MAKE SURE YOU REMEMBER THE NAME
CHARISMA STYLES “THE SOUND OF THE BEAT”
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Niggaz always think that they be the one to run a situation. They feel like they are Gods gift to women all the time. What they say is what goes. Charity had just moved to this small town in Pennsylvainia called Erie. How she got there still remains a mystery for her being she was from a major city some four hundred miles away. She did seem to have some family there though. It really didn't matter to her because she didn't know them anyway. Her way of thinking was if you didn't...
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Okay now this shit ain't easy and I didn't make it hear on no yellow brick road either. Growing up on these streets is rough but I always said that I was gone make it, I never knew how but I knew I was. You see ever since I can remember all anyone said about me was this child is special and I can't believe how pretty she is (being I came from a dope fiend momma and a daddy that always tried to make everything right. My Daddy (whose name was Eddie) worked hard two and three jobs at a t...
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THIS IS AN EXCERPT FROM "THE SOUND OF THE BEAT" I was in deep thought and was trying to make sense of the whole situation when my train of thought was broken by Shay yelling out, "What the fuck is going on?" I looked up to see what she was talking about. I was so deep in my own thoughts that I hadn't even noticed all the police and people in front of my building. I went to get out of the car and Keith grabbed me and said, "I got you." I snatched awa...
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BRAVO.. I LOVE THE UNDERLAYING MEANING THAT I OBTAINED FROM THIS. THE REFERENCE TO A SAUNA WHERE ONE TRIES TO BREATHE BUT ITS DIFFICULT COULD BE APPLIED TO MANY THINGS. LOVED IT
OKAY FIRST OFF LET ME SAY THAT YOU DID A GREAT JOB WITH DESCRIPTION OF EVERYTHING. FROM THE EYES TO THE COLD HARD LUMP IN YOUR THROAT LIKE ICE. WHEN YOU FIRST START OFF YOU NEED TO GRAB THE READER IN TO MAKE THEM WANT TO READ THE STORY. CAPTURE THEM IN YOUR FIRST COUPLE SENTENCES AND MAKE THEM PART OF THE STORY. I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU ARE GOING WITH IT BUT HAD TO GO BACK AND RE-READ SOME THINGS. MAKE IT SO THE READER DOESN'T HAVE TO DO THAT. BE SURE TO GET TO THE POINT NOT QUICKLY BUT DON'T L...
I LOVE YOUR WORK AND I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL U GET PUBLISHED. ANOTHER BRILLIANT PIECE.
I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS GREAT..I LOVED THE WAY YOU WERE ABLE TO ELIIMINATE THE USAGE OF THE MOST COMMON WORDS USED IN ANYTHING.
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