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AGE: 101
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 21

RON SELMOUR aka Chelevar
Actor, life long journey, a Painter by weekends; Writer by folly and Everything else is simply everything else.  

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Novel Treatments / god and green monkeys
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We were sitting there on the little gallery, my babe sister and I. since we were not aloud to go inside the house. Our Moma had gone running errands. Papa was at work at the bureau de Contribution. It was the first time she had done that. I don’t remember why but something was pressing. My mom was making sure we understood. She made a solemn plea to us, to me in particular given that I was the eldest, a plea that resonated deep inside me in the form of strict orders. We were not to go i...
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Poetry / Les Ages
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I must not forget who i am. i must not forget who i am?! i must remember who i am but to be to have been continues to be Who i am is to be. period. the way the ole day the way we were to be is to be born who i was born to be born how i was born to be born where i was born to be burn to be to be to be to be End be to be. And be till when; to be lived and loved and be loved. to be till when all; to be till when one two people chose to love to be is i am. simply. there was no who i was who i wa...
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Poetry / Elles
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  franchise femme, fawn Belle Magnolia, Cerise, ‘rose’, her shell Furore with her hair dye of canella Beasts of a gazelle, Elegant in her gallop Lit ants she cannot wallop She, beast of a gazelle Skin with the dye of cinnamon-nelle Scalene, emergent as if scalloped, Akin to a scaly tear, slip that slopped Acumen in cue, she, coquina, but quelled Soliloquy in silky scrawl, to you, impelled Swollen with pride, to what, of you, befell Silly colloquy, though, a tribute to...
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Poetry / OLD CRY CREOLE
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OLD CRY CREOLE Bloody and insane first came to mind The land of miserable tale of bravery Shame on you, them and yours and mine Volatile fables we live and die our misery Clouding our temples of deceitful pride Receding our thin, tired self. What treachery What pitiful sight, pity so, I missed a cry Laboring with reason and reason, it pleases me To such motive, I bewail as well as stride It is my calling, my presence and history Old cry Creole, I land of hands to your sky Old man, old, t...
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Poetry / The Marquee
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When the marquee ship Marine supreme Loiters its appendage in the foamy cream And its crop, kipped beam, Stealing the distant gleam Leaving the sea its seam Sentiments to be redeemed When stares become teemed With fleeing tears that stream Vivacity at velocity extreme Icing a sung I sing for you, my dame       RSe1mour
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Short Story / We Both Go Down Together
As i was reading this piece, one thing came to mind, one great idea, i may add. From the beginning i sensed i was reading something special. Then i thought, perhaps i should start this new thing, this new activity, y know? I'd decided that from now on, when i come across a sweet story like this one, i'm going to sit down with my lady and read it out loud to her. Then, together, we can have an intellectual discussion of some sort which in turn can be shared with You the writer. I enjoyed this ...
Poetry / The Tragedy
ok, here's the scoop. I came upon this piece - The Tragedy- by pure fluke and i'll be glad to comment on it. It caught my attention because of the easy breakdown of the strophs...make it easy to read. I particularly enjoy the tone and the rythm behind the thoughts. The rythm seems to suggest that the core of the piece is about personal deep internal turmoil...a love lost kinna thing. I appreciate the way it creeps on you into a full out outta control tragedy...what may be the beginning of a g...
Flash Fiction / Henrietta Maria (A Letter)
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Flash Fiction / Wizard On The Wall
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Screenplay / Whispers in the Dark
It says above that the age of the creator of this poem was thirty three. I almost wanted to doubt it. Then again, i remembered, when i was thirty three i was quite a profound thinker and a litterary stylist. So there you have it... It takes a lot of imagination to come up with original stories. I don't think you should worry about where you're gonna go with this one. It's all up to you sky is the limit. My critic alone isn't worth anything. Up to you to take it out there...produce it..sell it...