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LOC: Beaverton, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 18
LOC: Beaverton, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 18
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I live in a world of what if's and why's...The words of others no longer bring tears to my eyes nor leave me to settle or compromise, my values, my beliefs..Things I once did for others you see..I think in life there is few happy mediums..Settling is packaged in a great disguise and we call it compromise.. Compromise..Let me state...My ethics and my beliefs I will not put on a plate..For others to consume and leave me in ruin..I have lots I want to do and fuck you I don't need you..I can walk...
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~Lingering~ My mind races thinking about things and different places, thoughts of you linger and hide in different spaces,I am not sure why. What a terrible thing to waste still remember how you taste... The smell of your sex I cannot hide, not that I would want to try..The softness of your skin enhanced by the sheer beauty of your grin.. The strength in your hands as you grab my hair, just to tell me to hold my head"Yeah right there"..I reminisce in the taste of me on your lips, is there suc...
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I am frustrated, beyond being able to sit comfortably in this chair..Twisting my hair into knots..Feeling as if my world has been slightly rocked..Off Kilter..Looking through a rose colored filter..A spectacle to behold..As love for you grows..It starts to unfold that page left untold is finally going down on paper. I am angry about many things...The memories stored and tucked away so my brain can't see them..A shock to the system as a chance meeting brings it all to the front, trying to esca...
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As I trace my fingers along the shape of my body, I imagine your hand in it's place slowly grazing my face.. Soft fingers along the outline of my lips are waiting to be kissed. Slowly work your way to my hips which cannot wait to be licked. Would you think my skin soft?As pleasurable to you as it is to me?To what degree of division did I create through my honesty? Oh and let's not forget the DOC. My bottom lip full like a berry ready to be pulled. The nape of my neck and the hollow of my thro...
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This is wonderful, the structure and style is easy and rolls off the tongue..the story itself is sad yet reminiscent of happier things..Sort of makes one long for another. Makes you want to be in love with someone that much..Choice of words spoke to me..
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While I normally don't read military oriented stories, I find myself compelled to know what is in his gear bag. You wrote as if to lead us into something and I felt as if this was key and elemental in the story..Your character Gibbs seems to have a little more heart than the norm in the military and i am wondering other than him being sent to the place he is at, where is the Osama Bin Laden tie in..I liked this story and feel a sense of Gibbs, I will assume there will be more to come.
my flighty muse has abandoned me again. I stumble among the stars transcendent artistry undulating vortexes of hope and inspiration whirling and whipping by. That was beautiful, and kind of awesome..I think this is personally one of the best things I have ever read as I feel like I know exactly what you are talking about. Candy is dandy but liquor is quicker and helps anesthetize doesn't it..Great job painting a picture with your words..
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WOW, this was awesome..Use of the english language was beautiful. I am somewhat intelligent and didn't know some of them..It made me sad and reticent feeling that you were trying to gain your childhood back and no matter how hard you tried just couldn't quite get there..I feel for you..This was very reflective and took me to the place that I think you were aiming for in a reader.. The visual of the yellow busses tires and sleds appearing solidified the picture in my mind..
I was surprised at how this ended, I was expecting some sweet(no pun intended) declarative statement of love, but was pleased to be led down a path of anger..Surprising..I like things I read to be unpredicitable and this was. thank you..I like angry chick stuff as we are entitled to get it out there.
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