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AGE:
31
LOC: Syracuse, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 16
LOC: Syracuse, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 16
I have always enjoyed writing poetry. It was a way for me to vent. Somehow along the way as I began writing during a tough time; it turned into a story. Personally I am proud of it, yet I am scared to share it with the public. I know this is the next step; and it is a way for me to get feedback and a idea of what the public will think. I have titled my book, Varlets Journey, a story written in a fantasy sense but I am really telling the story of my own struggles to journey in my life. I am new to this and hope to meet people and get great feedback. I also hope my story is something people end up enjoying to read.
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"I’ll drink the nasty stuff u told me about, I just cant do this..” and she sobbed. Joyce had just over dosed and been depressed for some time now. Memories unfolded began to over take her in ways she never though possible. “you better drink this, if you don’t we have to put the tube down your throat again” The nurse said frustrated, because Joyce had pulled the tube out that was taking all the poison out of her body. Luckily, she was ok, and she did what she was told. But she still was not ...
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I like this poem. I like the way the poem reads. I especially think the last paragraph is done very well and concludes the poem well.
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