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like a drop in the torrent pounding into the walls a twig on the current, heading over the falls a mote in a cyclone whirling violently 'round one volt in a bolt thrown, finally going to ground feeding on a brittle leaf who's the little thief that steals the carpet from beneath our feet? do you choose to run until you fall? or was it you refused to risk it all, and lost it? you just tossed it... tidy doilies of order spread on igneous rock men patrolling the border armed w/ the hands of ...
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About ten-thirty the following night, the Goth Sloth made her entrance. That’s what I think of her as, anyway. It’s my own private nickname for her, not that I’d ever say it out loud within her earshot. I have these little pet names for a lot of my regulars. Like the ancient little gnome who comes in once a week for the latest issue of Weekly World News and a small bag of peanuts (which he promptly dumps into his bottle of Dr. Pepper while still standing at the counter), I call him Woody Wood...
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INESCAPABLE GOAT It begins late at night, as you’re preparing for bed: you take one last peek through the curtains, and see, in the gauzy golden teepee of streetlight, standing in the skewed puddle of its shadow, a lone goat. Its coat dingy white, stained with large, amorphous spots of brownish-gray and almost-black. Jaws describe asymmetric half circles as it chews, chew, chews. But what is it doing there? What is it chewing? Above its raggedy swaying goatee, flashes of blood red and silver...
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WINGS OF POLISHED CHROME Gettin’ fed up with the whispers in the air duct I can never quite make out a single word they say I’m either wired or so tired that I just can’t wake up The medication made me groggy so I flushed it away When my angel comes to save me With her blazing sword and wings of polished chrome All these demons that enslave me Will be vanquished & I’ll soar to Heaven’s dome Gettin’ ready for a battle that will settle something: Where the one world ends and the other starts De...
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I have a problem with the concept of tattooing as rape of the "virgin skin" when the person being tattoed is so enthusiastic and compliant a client. I realize the idea of it being rape is in the tattoo artist's mind and is in fact the thing that turns him on so much. But I think the rape analogy would be more appriorpiate if he did it to an unconscious, unwilling victim. Come to think of it, I don't recall having ever read a story in which someone indulges a fetish for forced body mod, but th...
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This is a good premise for a novel; I think you could do a lot with this. You seem to do a pretty good job setting scenes and delineating characters in a brief & efficient manner. I felt that there was a little too much blatant exposition going on in the professor's monologue--I understand that this was your method of laying out the premise for the novel, but I would hope when & if you actually write it you would spread this information out in more natural-sounding dialogue. I also would have...
i haven't read the preceding chapters of this tale, so i will just address my impressions based on this brief excerpt. the writing is clean and unadorned. some of the dialogue seems a little stiff, sounds more like something scripted than the way people talk(i'm thinking in particular of arlyn's dialogue during the cafeteria confontation). it sounds like a pretty interesting premise. is this some kind of commentary on (or extrapolation of) contemporary terrorism, i wonder? one nitpicky techni...
the story grabbed me right away, as a good story ought to. the Homer Simpson tie is a nice touch; unfortunately, you refer to it as a Bart Simpson tie a few paragraphs later. oops! "two loud 'ouch' sounds from a random orifice"--isn't there really only one orifice which could emit this particular sound? on page 6, hugo rule #6 should probably read "...stern words ARE used" rather than "AND used". "the waxen candelabra of her nakedness" ?!?! not sure what this means, but it SOUNDS great. page ...
100.0% Review Quality (3 Votes)
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