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Wish You Would Say Trudy Newell, 2003 verse You don't smile much anymore, there's just a glimpse of a grimace on your face when I tell the old familiar jokes we used to laugh about mmm verse I try to catch you at the door before you leave But you won't stop, you're getting on with your day You don't talk so much anymore, there's just that Civil little “Hello, how do you do” and then you're gone oh pre chorus / build And I'm talking to myself in an empty room Wanting you but you keep running a...
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Still life, hot chai tea Just the trick when Things get to be A little too hectic Way too fast Slow down... give it up Soak it away, in a Nice, warm, LUSH! bath Quiet, sinking gotta chill, need a happy pill get to thinking things are swell chill out, give it up Soak it away in a nice, warm LUSH! bath I like late nights Party girl.. "look at me Feeling so Alright" A litle outrageous.. too much Sleep it off, soak it away in a Nice, warm LUSH! bath Don't feel pretty... not too perfect need to lo...
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Still life, hot chai tea Just the trick when Things get to be A little too hectic Way too fast Slow down... give it up Soak it away, in a Nice, warm, LUSH! bath Quiet, sinking gotta chill, need a happy pill get to thining things are swell chill out, give it up Soak it away in a nice, warm LUSH! bath I like late nights Party girl.. "look at me Feeling so Alright" A litle outrageous.. too much Sleep it off, soak it away in a Nice, warm LUSH! bath Don't feel pretty... not too perfect need to lov...
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A Desire Within the measure Of another time and place I assume my fate. I've left incisions - Broken and discarded thoughts; Failed to follow through. Forgot to make sense, Made what was gracious unkind With a gestured thought. It all becomes small, Ritualistic cement Making me taller. A Pursuit Sleep abates once more Released from its tyranny To yet again roam. The truth will follow Another attempt at flight Relax, ride the hope... Unbridled passion Not forgotten, abandoned - Just leavened a...
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c. T.Newell, 2003 verse one I bet you never had a genuine problem, I bet you never thought it was uncommon To be living in perpetual comfort and style and i wonder if you ever took a moment To comprehend the genuine componets of your lifestyle are you sleeping as much as you should and I want just one minute of your time so I can try to explain my point of view to you I'll do my best to help you understand the way I do verse two Well I bet you never had to wait for nothing I could not imagine...
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All Over You T Newell, 2003 verse one I saw you walking down the street the other day You looked right through Then you just turned away It breaks me right open when I think of you cause You don't even notice I'm around chorus How long before you Before you start to care How long before you Even know that I'm there How long before you Before you fall for me The way I fell all over All over you All over you verse two My friends, they tell me I've gotta find another man God knows, I've tried to...
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Within the measure Of another time and place I assume my fate I've left incisions Broken and discarded thoughts Failed to follow through Forgot to make sense Made what was gracious unkind With a gestured thought It all becomes small Ritualistic cement Making me taller
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Upon her silken cheek Flow rivers of relentless pain The taste of bitter-sweet An undeserved rain A furrow rested in her brow Chaotic and confused Melodious, enchanted words Lay dormant, stale, disused Her shining eyes are stricken With unfathomable tradgedies From safe within her prison Locked with iron chains The innocence, once disappeared Leaves ghastly scarred remains
Version 1
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Still life! Hot chai tea Just the trick when Things get 2 be A little too hectic Way too fast Slow down... give it up Soak it away!! in a Nice, warm, LUSH! bath! Quiet, sinking gotta chill, need a happy pill get to thining things r swell chill out, give it up Soak it away in a nice, warm LUSH! bath I like late nights Party girl.. "look @ me Feeling so "Alright" " A litle outrageous.. too much Sleep it off, soak it away in a Nice, warm LUSH! bath Don't feel pretty... not too perfect need to lo...
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c.2004 T.Newell Lady - Let's face up to it; White picket fences are Extremely high-maintenance; Are you sure it's worth the strain And all the effort you waste faking it? Princess - Learn to deal with this; Life with your Prince Charming may not Be 'just so' harmonious, when on occasion, Mr. Right Gets things so awfully wrong! What's more, I absolutely guarantee that You'll learn to loudly scream Unreserved, furious and probably Somewhat mistakenly, at least from time to time. Girl - Get real...
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