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LOC: Taunton, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 07
LOC: Taunton, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 07
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" I never had a ROUGH night , but I've had many a TOUGH mornings!!! "
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"LOVE'S UNSEEN WORLD" Your love helps my blind eyes sift. Through all of life's evil to the pure. &...
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"Yeah I know This Stinks" The sun melts into the sea....what a pretty sight. The flowers smell so fresh and...
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"I'M A SON OF THE DEVIL" I hang on the corner day and night . I'm in every mother's nightmare....
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“My First Crush” I was in sixth grade when I discovered what love was all about. I walked in the classroom that first day of school thinking I knew all there was to know. As I slid into my seat, my eyes suddenly fell on the most beautiful female I had ever seen. I could not take my eyes off of her, my teacher,whose name I soon discovered was Mrs.Golut.As time passed I came up with my own personal pet nickname if you will, Mrs.Golden . I couldn’t even look in her be...
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hi there, i wouldn't call this a poem...and the subject matter is well known..but i gave you an "8" anyway, because it is a subject that so important and shouldn't be forgotten...(you should change ur title to feed instead of fee) but all in all, i agree with you holy...nice one,,,jim
hi there, i like it, the slaughter of the boredom line to jumping for a treat to get into or keep into the click. the only problem i have with it ,is that it maybe to long for a song, i suggest you trim the fat, like we all have to do it get it to be a 3 1/2 mintue song so it's radio friendly..and you want that..but in general..nice job,jim
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