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AGE: 25
LOC: Germany
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 22

Honestly, I find it would probably be more appropriate if someone who knows me wrote this, for ‘About Me’ seems a mystery to even myself. If I must, though:
I was born in Venice, FL. At the age of 2 my parents were divorced and I stayed with my dad. At 5 he remarried and also decided to devote his efforts in life towards God and began his pursuit towards a PH.D in religion and becoming a reverend. At 10 I moved in with my mom, whom was a bartender.
I lived with her in Wisconsin for 10 years, and at 20 moved to Orlando, FL for college. I graduated in the fall of 2006 with a major in Computer Animation / Visual FX. A year after that I landed a job at a media company (Royall Media Inc.), where I worked for a year before traveling about …

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Short Story / The Book: Part 5
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Welcome to a mini series brought to you by Christopher J. Perger. If you are first time reading this blog segment, I highly suggest that you start with "The Book : Part 1". After all, the only climax you'll get is from the proper illustrated placement. Cheers!     The last call for New York, folks. I repeat, this is the last call for New York! "How do these people live like this?" I asked as I flopped out the day's newspaper upon my lap. "One day at a time, ...
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Novel Treatments / Wishful Thinking
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                                                Wishful Thinking     Four wishes. That's what I was given. Yeah, I know what you’re thinking because I thought the same thing: Isn't it supposed to be 3 wishes? Well, as it turns out, Ford E-150's...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Complations of Incomplete Thoughts
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Cracking pedestals, chipping and weathering away as though they've forgotten what stability they were made to uphold. The clouds, as amorphous and shape retaining they care to be, gallantly soar overhead; mindful of nothing in particular to us. The Earth smiles a frown; glancing every which way that she wishes with a mouthful of remorse, yet not the stomach to digest any of it. Compositions of incomplete thoughts, it all seems to be. If never, but now. If ever, but how?
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Maybe's
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Speaking in Maybe's Maybe I'm okay. Maybe I can be more happy about it all. Maybe I know that I accepted my fate of thinking too much long ago. Maybe I'm manic expressive. Maybe I can lay my eyes upon any individual and be appeased with what it is I see. Maybe you'll call me.. Maybe you won't. Maybe I speak to nobody. Maybe I care not. Maybe I'm smiling right now as my picture shows; my arm around gumby in a wisking manner I can only hope to find someday. Maybe I show a side of myself through...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / it can recant
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life can be hard for no reason at all. it can make you think deeper than needed. it can make you listen harder to a song you've heard a billion times, but never like that moment. it can make you whisper to yourself sweet nothings that come out of your mouth as sour somethings. it can make you lower your head in retrieval, for the surroundings are overbearing even on a Saturday. it can make you wish things you never imagined wishing. it can make you love the cost of love. it can make you love....
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I have to say, you got one heck of a story going here. It grabbed me the whole way through, particularly the situation, altogether, of a vampire being caught off guard in her own house on fire. While there were some simple grammar errors (e.g. : "...no longer alive and all his kin’s had passed away recently." no longer alive and all OF his KIN had passed away recently. "...television that was fifty years old and switch it on to an American sitcom." television that was fifty years old and SWIT...
As far as grammar goes, I found little to nothing wrong! Well written. And with flavor, I would critique that more similes would liven the flow of things. While many writers have gotten away with close to none, I think your piece would be more lively with some daring similes. And, metaphors are always fun, but don't get me wrong; you have a great piece of work going. Keep it up! Christopher J. Perger
where to start.... you're ability to write is, not only there, it's shimmering through this piece. great job! I particularly like the flow of your writing. it doesn't just captivate, it tackles. as for an overall, i'm going to have to read it a couple more times to fully wrap my mind around all of it. seriously though, great job! also... there's a music video that your work reminded me of that you can find here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBDwYaZKfnM it's by Shiny Toy Guns and called 'Le ...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Writing to a Stranger
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within the inconsistency lies the consistency, as they say, and applies now. i really like the passion behind the words. particularly how you broke the cardinal rule of poetry. What cardinal rule... exactly. I think you have pain, but that's just my personal interpretation of your scheme of words. Tchuse! chris perger
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