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AGE: 20
LOC: Snow Hill, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 23

My name is Tom and I am 17.

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Poetry / Winter
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Its winter alive and dead a tobacco mouth and cold chagrin shivers and goosebumps tired friends a lifeless glaze over a gaze into the night we walked through the paths hearing bombs in our heads like snow capped mountains and failing descent the smoke rose with the moths into the lighting overhead rain would only piss them off if the cigarettes got wet the outside was merely our escape from the barrels, hotheads vent. the silence endured our cabin fever and whenever it was met I was the one ...
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if nothing is slicker than lithium grease then why not inject into my own soul forward them a note of their castles breach and let me know when I am to be told the nature of premeditated crimes the stairs and ladders took us through the times when all else failed we’d snatch it up and leave our victims blind Chorus: battle me in the wretched blood of the damned strike the match as wind whips me with sand these vinyl doorways elastic and grand these bars will only help me to show the world cha...
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Poetry / dreamland
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Out of some strange nebulous vision I stumbled upon this metaphor, taken by dismal nowhere streets, and a dirty ole' batch of stars; I sway'd a drunkard off to meet that devil who arranged a talk, the funny thing is he never said how long or which way to walk. My loved one sat a bed next to me, for she hear a quiet shuffle, yet this dream of mine seemed, not a bit in the least uncomfortable; Lords brother stopped me at a school house, he said he'd give a tour, teach proceeded to take them a l...
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Of yet to inscribe What I feel inside A plethora of words A mind to decide Your stare is innocent as wine I don’t know who you are I cant stop thinking of you A stake in my heart to run from it all Bleeding out burns through all the cavities Start a fire in place of my time To get away from your control stare into those eyes why cant you sneak away from it its only a little intimate The quiet is on the inside and why is this happening to us The icicles are hanging off the curtain Your whisper...
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Poetry / and to this i
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Reckless, is but a meager word but what was felt gave regret in silence I crept, but not to forget, the sound the pound, of the nothing on the ground and to this I gave a shudder, “keep going” Courage, is a lie that holds me up but we lie to ourselves everyday a crystalline masterpeice catches mine eye this gracious pine gives birth to life Death, is past the concept of sword over this I shall not fret I have lost the bet, with devil not yet, im bound not frowned, but this will ke...
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i love it. abecedarian is cool. wonderful use of vocabulary and it enhances the flavor unlike a lot of poetry out there. i feel retarded, i had to look up half the words...rawr. change is hard. i like the way you wrote the "P" line. the repetitive nature of it emphasizes the importance and emotion that should be infered along with it and i can see where your coming from i guess yea..kids these days, if thats what you meant. I could be completely off but yea..ooo the "I" and "J" lines are good...
i like line 4. i like the fact that you have alot of optimism. but i think its a great poem. you should write a bit more and see how that could work with it... maybe you could try to paint a better picture instead of a philosophy, just a suggestion. like add some imagery and maybe put a story of something that happened that is relevant to the topic in the poem... i wasnt sure what you were talking about in the beggining though. is it you looking back on your younger days or is it saying to no...
Poetry / Echoes Slip
"poison"...i think its "echoes".. im not sure uh check microsoft word heheh...but eck grammar is dumb...i loved this poem, it was grandifularific, if thats a word and ye you should continue it cause it seems open ended....umumum what to put....hmmm maybe somethin about age....like ageless specters roaming our corridors.....maybe not cause your talkin bout senses...rawr...i think it would be pretty unhealthy to eat a ghost but maybe you could have an encounter with one and describe how it gest...
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