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LOC: Colton, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 16
LOC: Colton, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 16
i’m 19 years old from a small town called colton in northern new york. I’ve been writing since i was 12… mostly depressing poems. now and then i find myself to start writing an upbeat poem and end up turning it into lyrics. so i guess i kinda write both. i usually don’t share my thoughts… but i’ve been hiding my talent for the past 7 years and i thought the world should be ready for it now. so let me know what you think.
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I lay here at night thinking of you Knowing that you are out there Thinking of me too A cute little smile Is seen on my face When I get that text That lonely feeling Is replaced Even though we are far apart I know that we are forever Close together in our hearts The feelings are there We both know it’s true And we will be together When you come home soon I wait and wait for the day Hoping it’s not much longer To be in your arms and Feel them wrapped around me To feel your lips on mine It’s be...
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she's cried for so long no one seems to care she suffers from the pain from all the cold stares she falls in love always falls hard a few broken promises later they always run out the door her spirit has died she can only take so much she's not good enough for anyone and realizes it's time she can't take the pain any longer she knows it's time the last straw has fallen and broke her heart she picks up the knife closes her eyes when she opens them all she sees is the blood it's pouring over th...
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i see you lookin at me lickin your lips thinking you can get with this keep starin boy cuz you don't know the thoughts in my head you best believe me when i tell ya i'll be true to my one and only you i see ya watchin me shake my ass boy from the corner of the other side of the room you must know by now i'm wanting you you don't know the thoughts in my head visions of you in my bed covered from head to toe with all my favorite toppings you know i'm wanting only you lickin up the whipped cream...
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I keep retracing my footsteps over and over Thinking of you makes me lose my mind Everywhere I look, you're all I see I got a smile on my face Because I saw your soul through your eyes You're my love and you're my friend You know I'm yours til the end Their's no one in the world I'd want to be with You're everything in my life their is to be I love you with every beat of my heart You're the love of my life Everything I've ever wanted No one could ever compare to you I've never felt this way a...
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Your touch makes me quiver inside Your kiss makes my lips shake Your arms make me feel safe With you, I can conquer the world No one can take your place. I don't know what I'd do without you I wouldn't be able to live Being with you is the best thing in my life If I lost you, I'd go crazy I was a wreck without you You've turned my life around You showed me what it felt like to be wanted To be needed and loved Their's nothing that could ever compare to you Or the way I feel about you You're th...
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not bad... their's one line that i don't understand though "know me seperate from the misleading shadows you have left for" maybe you could try to clarify it a bit.
i think that this is a great poem... i love the style you used. it flows easily, it's not rushed. there is so much detail to it... i can picture it in my mind.
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