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AGE:
40
LOC: Middle River, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 15
LOC: Middle River, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 15
Hello. I am a 40 year old female who would like to be a published author someday but lack the time and knowledge to do so. It’s good to see a site like this where people take writing seriously. I am certain I will benefit tremendously from a site such as this.
Other hobbies of mine include music and arts and crafts. I love karaoke and crochet. I think I am fairly creative and I love making things for people.
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There once was a girl named Ima Brick Who tried her hand a limerick Try as she may I'm sorry to say There's nothing that rhymes with limerick!
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I look at the clock on the wall And wonder why doesn't he call It's getting near dawn as I let out a yawn And back into bed I do crawl.
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Your lazy ass left me for broke. Are they real? Hell no! What a joke! You ate all my food, And slept with that dude, Now your clothes on the lawn up in smoke.
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Gasping as I take one final breath while you plunge cold steel through my heart.
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I see her everyday by herself in the park, An elderly woman all alone with her thoughts. I wonder what she is thinking as her face changes expression from time to time. I move closer to her and as I sit she begins to speak. “When my husband passed away I heard the angel song Carrying him up to Heaven Where I knew he would belong. He was a wonderful man And I miss him so much. The way he laughed, the way he smiled, His gentle, loving touch. When my sister passed away I heard the angel song Car...
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I thought this was the perfect lullaby for children. Very simplistic and it flowed very nice as well. I also liked the last two lines which reinforces to the child that mommy or daddy will be there when the child awakens. To me I feel those lines invoke a sense of security in a child's mind which allows for a more peaceful slumber. It would be great to hear this lullaby set to music.
Wow this is really action packed. But hey it's an easy 15 credits
This was a very well written and enjoyable piece of work and I found myself agreeing with your philosophy on how to be happy. I also enjoyed the use of sarcasm throughout the blog. It effectively added humor to what could otherwise be considered a serious topic. Excellent advice.
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I had a difficult time reading this not because it is a tongue twister but more so because it didn't flow very well as a limerick should. I think for the sake of winning the contest this definitely has a shot. The last verse was kinda funny and the title is clever. Good luck with the contest.
I thought this was very well written for your first try. The piece flowed very well and I found the subject matter to be humorous and amusing. I also agree with you on the symetrical. As long as if flows well who cares how many sylables there are.
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