I'm never satisfied with the ending of short stories, save a few...I truly enjoyed reading this short and I am not surprised at the ending...it's fitting and perfect, although I'd like to know more, so perhaps this was a success in my eyes. Of course the depressing lump of this stuttering boy's story should end in a depressing lump. I'm usually not one for the "down and out" type stories because they can be done horribly, but I really felt for the narrator- your story telling is fantastic and...

That's sweet and easy to relate to.