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AGE:
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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 01
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 01
Hello people of Earth. I am Morgan. It is very nice to meet you. First off let me tell you something that can be a big turn off, or a big turn on. I have a strong opinion on politics, the world today, global econmy ect. Trust me, you will not change my view or mind on anything. So if your trying to convince me to not like Obama, for example, you better run, cause I stand up for what i belive in. Im not afraid to push people down in the process too. I may sound harsh, but im soo not. Im just thick headed.(: I love to review peoples work. So if you want something reviewed all you have to do is ask me. I only hope you would do the same in return! I love to use poetry as a way of getting things noticed. I also admire anyone who can write bea…
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I never knew how much i needed you until you weren't there. Life without you is truly just not fair Your smile makes me feel like a bird just learning to fly Please just smile, or at least try You have not been your self at all I don't want to see you fall Losing someone is never easy The man downstairs can be so sleezy I know that I don't even understand But perk up, dont be so bland I miss your warming hugs I miss your playful tugs Hold me in a hug ...
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"There is nothing wrong with you, i just dont see us in a relationship." That is pretty much all I have herd my whole life. This one seemed to sting the most though, only because I though Kevin was different that I maybe had a chance with him, however slim that chance may be. He is quirky, funny, outgoing, confident, cute, everything i am not. My unruly curly hair makes me want to go into a dark corner and cry, my crazy father wants makes me want to bawl, and I really am starting to...
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I never knew how much i needed you until you weren't there. Life without you is truly just not fair Your smile makes me feel like a bird just learning to fly Please just smile, or at least try You have not been your self at all I don't want to see you fall Losing someone is never easy The man downstairs can be so sleezy I know that I don't even understand But perk up, dont be so bland I miss your warming hugs I miss your playful tugs Hold me in a hug ...
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I never knew how much i needed you until you weren't there. Life without you is truly just not fair Your smile makes me feel like a bird just learning to fly Please just smile, or at least try You have not been your self at all I don't want to see you fall Losing someone is never easy The man downstairs can be so sleezy I know that I don't even understand But perk up, dont be so bland I miss your warming hugs I miss your playful tugs Hold me in a hug ...
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There's always a dream in the back of mind That makes me wanna wake up and cry Theres always a a thought That makes me wanna sigh There's always an image that makes me wanna die Refrain: When I see you, When I think of you, My heart drops, My heart stops Cause your eyes, your face, your beautiful soul Makes me feel whole (end of refrain.) Seperate ages-seperate grades- seperate lives I won't let that ruin my chance with you Cause the way you make me smile Makes me wanna stick around for a whi...
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Good flow dallas. I like the the last line, It adds Flavor. But to me, it needs a little more. I cant put my finger on it, it's just lacking something. I think you should change "warm" to something else. Sure she is warm, but there are about 1 million other adajatives that would better describe mrs.necesssary in this piece. try a word like Kind or Love, or even Pure. Doesn't writing have two t's? so I=change "writing" to "writting" nothing else to say!Great dallas!
Okay,the qoute almost contradicts itself, but it's a good thing in this case. I think you should add "ever" inbetween "who" and "loved me" To be honest, I don't like the tittle it seems to have no relation to the topic, I understand where your point is coming from though. You can keep the aspect of that tittle with a more fitting one like "First love for and Ugly Duckling." I like the quote though! Good job.
Mrs. Necessary, I have one word for you. Beautiful. I am truly touched that you wrote a piece about Wade, for he is talented beyond what anyone expects from a 13 year old boy. He makes you want to smile from his dedication, from his love to write. It radiates to you. Every time you read a piece of something Wade has writtin you seem to feel better about yourself, and better about what you write. Which is an odd thing for a writer to feel, especily after reading someoneelses piece of work. We ...
First off before i even got to the second page i saw a mistske that i was sure to forget if i didnt write it down, the scentece "The news in Germany, where I live, was dominated by the Presidential race,..." I dont understand it. Remove the comma from after "for" their mmistakes, better flow that way. I love all your quirky little facts about the Germans, it adds life and a little more substance to your stroy. (I love the one 'the Germans adore Boston') Made me chuckle. I love how you also po...
I love your use of the parentheses. (sp. I am an awful speller, sorry) I dont like all the sssshhhh's on the sssshhhh, instead, i think you would make a biggetr and better point if it was (shh!) instead. Overall good job!
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