cybertyger's profile
AGE:
34
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 15
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 15
My name is Jeff, I am a union Iron Worker in Cincinnati, Ohio USA. I write to get out bottled up feelings, meaning, it takes awhile for me to sit down and create. I have more poems on myspace.com/cybersober if anyone is interested in me or my work. I am friendly to just about anyone, very humble, and outgoing. Feel free to add me on here or the aforementioned site. Hope you enjoy what I write.
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Guide my hand for a moment, take me somewhere new, an inspirational gift to me from you. Reflect in my spirit an image made for two. Not a mirror, but a friend, A glimpse at something true. Her face shaded by lace, gracefully walking to take her place. Side by side, a white flowing gown, dancing in the sunlight. Twin souls assemble, a butterfly emerges. A creation of God to fulfill their purpose. To love and unify, with an embrace then a kiss. All the angels rejoice at heaven on Earth.
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We perceive and believe That of what is written. We take a drink from an apple, The serpent has been bitten. A smitten giant, broken alliance, Defyant in ourselves. Help is there, everywhere, It only comes in twelves. Dreams are steam to fuel our minds, With oil to run smoother. Change a tire with new attire. You are still a loser. Cruise control, automatic, Static in your system. Lose control, your an addict, Addicted to the venom. Why try to deny, That of what is written? Quitting dry, slit...
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Hazy processes and imperialistic motives, propaganda in the media feeding vultures. Subcultures blending, breeding, bending, bleeding, sending greetings to any heart beating. Seating limited if your opinions conflict, and living the lies that cry for freedom. Let me greet'em with a hug so snug, pour me a cup, and for you a mug. Let love, above all else, guide your heart and deny your self. Paper laws are gouging raw the eyes that saw. Sewed up lips, and distant trips, crawl your way up out of...
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It doesn't have to rhyme, and I don't have to think. I'm just the medium for the artist pulling my strings I'm no dummy, just his friend. When He's ready, I jump eagerly, in awe of what's to come! Themes conveyed, thirst quenched, it happens unexpectedly. I have the option not to hear. But what a waste that would be. I wish I could record Him quickly, so to capture His every Word. His appearance is a mystery, His versus, unrehearsed. I think I love Him, the way He orchestrates passionately, i...
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Instruments to aid life The Uncreate is unknown Full-blown aids in an age of sacrifice Your breathe has been stolen Glowing with the guilt From a thousand dirty deeds Pleading for mercy In a world of tainted seeds Worldly possessions gathered to lather your soapy minds The instrument keeps turning as the burning feeds the blind Time to unwind, Time is of essence, Time, the concept itself is in question An exception is made to those who search the answer lies within and trancends the winds of ...
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I tried to understand the context that the word amenity was used in and based on this definition (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amenity) I could not see how it fits, other than that it rhymes. I liked lines 6 & 7 very much... I would consider rewording line 8, an example would be: Time, where unlimited words are permitted. The contraction "aren't" affects the natural flow in my opinion. In line 12 I suggest changing "as seen" to "is seen". Overall, reads like rap lyrics, great rhyme, some mech...
"...the only thing Felix knew was that he had an 85% chance of being deported if he missed the kick!" This was the first line that caused me to laugh. You are definitely a story teller... I like football, I like satire, so, I probably like this piece more than mainstream society. However, I would consider taking out the gaping hole in the birth of Timmy, and rewording that part... in my opinion it lowers the overall quality of the work with something that may be too offensive for a woman or a...
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The Untimely Murder of Thirteen Interns at the Undersized Hands of Someone Who Resembled Dr. Edel...
You are brilliant, I don't see this as a poem, but it is one of the best pieces I have ever read in my life... how original to me and creative. This should be in print somewhere... where I have no idea, but my only critique is that it doesn't seem to come off as poetry. He SIMPLY ran a polyholomicrosampling procedure on himself, took a biochemical analysis using the retropsychoneural gylospection processor, mixed in a bit of leftover ichthyo-orcine fœtal tissue for filler, and popped the con...
Were you peeping in my window last night...? :) I am just someone who writes poetry from time to time, but I rather enjoyed your poem. What is the structure or rules for a Haiku poem? My review is from a reader's point of view. Change nothing, in my opinion. I was entertained :)
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