nice work i agree i hate all the reviewers who go on about the grammer made mte curious, childhood memory?

like the idea , may work better with poetry as you need to be succinct with this medium

decnt enough story, complex plot. complex background, needs further developement. could make the characters a bit more real.

more like early Jam than Depche mode fairly basic, lyrics lack muturity, i thought this was a teenage rant

I loved this work particularly this passage The demon is here now. His rage again. I feel it coursing through me. Back in my conscious the pain in my fingertips back now. I look at the bloody mess at the end of my fingers. I gag. The pain spreads across all my fingers now. I see the bugs moving beneath my skin. Crawling. I fear they will continue to move up my body if I don’t take action. I bring my hand to my mouth. I taste blood. It’s oddly refreshing. Rejuvenating. I bite hard into my own ...

strong review, emotive heart felt liked There is no God, here, no hope, no light and little mirth except that which falls from the lips of his companions. He is bound by the delight of others amid a desolate existence touches on the freud also slightly repetitive also too long a condensed version would be better nice try

your a head case who needs some bromide. you sound like a reluctant nerd, your wasted in that office, try being a porn star like me, just shag shag shag, and the odd uzi.

really insightful, made me think, particularly liked Well in fact, they usually do no research at all. They review the research the drug company gives them that the drug company did on their own drug! And so common sense would tell you what these former/future drug company executives are going to say about the safety of the new drug right i think some of it is naive though, i am a drug company executive and you should see the paper work i have to do to push my rather mediocre drug