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AGE:
18
LOC: Glasgow, KY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 28
LOC: Glasgow, KY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 28
My writings are a basic need to escape reality. They allow me to releave stress and anger. Everything that happens in my stories is based on my emotins at that moment. The majority of my writings are fantasy but I’m not subject to limitations.
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try 1: Amber says: As love comes, It goes, As friends come, They go, As life soon comes, It soon ends. Prince says: a soul left to wander the realms for eternity. abandon yet never alone Amber says: As never alone, To never meet one soul, As lonely as a rock in a desert. Prince says: a rock in the desert shading the poor lizard from the blazing sun, at night left alone only to look forward to the sun rise once again Amber says: As soon as the sun rises, The moon falls, Darkness covers the lan...
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Decievingly unfair to those it hates but the ones it favors flourish and bask in lifes glory
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life isnt what you make out of it, its what people make out of you, because in reality its the world that shapes how you live your life.
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Everyone plays with me like I’m a damn puppet Treating me like a slave Always pulling, pulling on my strings It hurts and yet I feel so numb How can I explain, explain I’m not like everyone else I’m different and yet the same A heart beats within this chest of mine Letting me share their pain
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A petal falls to the floor And life withers away A gentle tap at the door Without her he can no longer stay Death comes to all But too soon to some Her death is his down fall Now she knows he will come He questions his actions But it’s far too late Death waits at attention Today is his date
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you have such an optomistic outlook. its a good poem and i believe you portrayed the message you wanted to get across.
nice, i like it/ a lot of repitition. ut gets your point across. im going to fore warn you now though. i like this piece but im sure you will get some bad reviews because some people hate repitition. keep up the good work and remember it doesnt matter what others think of your pieces. what matters is how it makes you feel when you read and write it.
strong piece, very strong. has a deep meaning and portrays how love turns out most the time. regardless of what most people say this poem applies to most anyone who has ever fallen in "love" (lust). or at least thats how it makes me react. now i saw one small grammar confussed should be confused and i liked how you closed the poem the same way you started it. it presents a question to the reader.asking them what they would do in a situation like that.
im not sure what inspired you to write this piece but i enjoyed reading it. the imagery is beautiful and the passion that went into it is amazing. i found one word flow error its nothing big --suppressed memories torn from violently her heart-- sounds better as torn violently from her heart if you continue this poem any further or make another please let me know. i enjoyed reading it. good luck on your writing.
wow this is a dark piece with a poerful emotion behind it. it seems more about an inner struggle but its hard to tell what with such a short piece. now there were some mistakes, so remember spell check isnt always right. --As light was took in away it should be taken i couldnt find any others right off hand but when you continue this piece, which i hope you will, be sure to proof read.
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