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AGE: 17
LOC: Guam
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16

In spite of all the torrents of gauze, I am Ally. From my mien, you can see an aspiring heroin, aiming for grit exuberance. Those that know me can vouch, I distaste wan efforts; but am adamant in reference to colloquially, innocuous Adams & Eves. In contrast, at times, I may indulge into a taciturn concession, pronouncing reticent monosyllables for I believe the slightest amount of inertia will refrain from poignant allusions. Theoretically, however, I have taken a hemlock potation, leading to exanimate body due to solidarity. Yet this transitory occupation of mine has kept me wistful for consolatory gestures, not pretences. Still, one goal I wish to attain, before rheumatism strikes, is to longer ail around querulously. If you wish to b…

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Short Story / Menagerie
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As I get off my car and wave my mother goodbye, I realize where I am-- the place of my mediocre experiences; where I had spawned in circles, where I screamed at the top of my lungs despite the hoards emerging and where I fought through with such vitality and naivety in their wake. And, as I am about to take my first step back into this circus, I turn around and make a dash for it. I run into the parking lot to find a living souvenir of this horrid place. He stands about six feet tall with hi...
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Poetry / Playing Catch Up
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Pull away from the norm And jump into the cellar hold Watch your world form From the dreary bleak to a colorful streak Though the void may ripe and tear That you’re reminded of the loneliness Know it’s okay to feel the world’s stare You have a certain loveliness Incomparable is who you are A radiant, twinkling star So, soak up this moment If you need the space It’s alright to pace To find your supplement It’s your time to sit back and relax Maybe, it’s what...
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Poetry / Babbling Refined
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Pedistals aren't meant for anyone For once complete faith is placed on another, It can be easily lost as it was to gain. Disappointment spreads rapidly As the progression of the night to day. From now on, It'll be best not to be so inclined to someone, To give so freely, a heart. Weakness shouldn't be felt nor should it be shown. This mask will be placed back on, As if to dare the world to scare me to death, While I patiently hope for someone to save me once again. Like they say the world is ...
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Poetry / The September Disposition
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The oddest sensation fills me up when I’m with you For some reason I cant depart alongside you If it was possible that you could hold me in your arms I swear I would never leave from the comfort of your warmth Lying my head on your chest, listening to every thump of your heart I could figure out how my life came to start That one day you came into my world, shattered torn and lost You taught me how to turn myself from a servant to the boss Still, sometimes I forget that we’re nothing more tha...
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Romance / Can I stop thinking of you now?
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His name is John, and I've met him three years ago, during our eighth grade year. Long before that, I didn't know he existed or bothered to find him. Still the year after, I would on and off fall for him. He had the looks entrancing any girl to want to be with him, and the shy mystique that made you want to talk to him out of sympathy and interest. But over the year, he grew to be one of the greatest friends I could ever have. He was there for me when I cried to moments where we acted like th...
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Poetry / so you think
by HowlinDog
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Poetry / You Think You Can?
by Meshek
Very cliche. Not very enjoyable to read. Too simplistic. Try express it more the true nature of passion for her?
Poetry / Winter's Kiss
by Anonymous
Remarkable how i enjoyed reading those words "this started in a winter's kiss" You have set the mood so well, though you used bits to describe this event, you captured your reader's imagination. Thoroughly, you have done a splendid job. I love your notion of Serendipity.
Quotes / How I Became a Writer - 6 Word Memoir
by Willow_Wren
I can't help but laugh. You're right, to be a writer you must view things differently from others. You have to be more creative, be inspired, and drawn to change. Truly, you write with honesty and humor. =)
Poetry / Until its Light, She Dances
by oknapp
Listen, you don't need to put so many pins for your work. Try limiting your ratings or rankings to 3, because rating you with all these criterias makes your reviewer tired. Also, it's quite redundant. As for the review. One night passes and then another. Through the crack I see one shadow dancing, dancing underneath "the" pale, "looming" moon. It is a trick of the light, surely, for who could dance so freely, so surely. It is a girl—"not" a living being but a villain of the dark "that lures" ...
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