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AGE:
21
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 24
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 24
Well my name is Henry Velazquez. I live in Chicago. Im a very mellow guy but restless at the same time. I love writing poetry, short stories & whatever comes to my mind at the moment. I love Music, its a very important part of my life. Its the drug that makes everything calm down, its what helps me face life. My favorite writer is Paulo Coelho, His writing speaks to me in a way no one can. I cant really think of anything else to say. If anyone has any questions feel free to ask.
Peace & Love
God Bless
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You Reached Out To Me With Selfish Intentions But Missed Instead You Touched My Heart. My Heart Put Down The Knife When It Felt Your Eyes. We Have Fallen In Dark Holes To Share Tears And Confusing Actions. We Are Both To Blame For Creating A Confusing World Full Of So Many Happy Moments. When We Are Together Its Just You And Me Walking The Earth. You See Other Walking By While I Stare At You Watching The Clouds With Soo Much Hope In My Eyes. Im Sorry But I Cant Let You Go, I Love You While Yo...
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Unfinished Thoughts Wondering Through Sharp Clouds. The Clouds Let The Stars Takeover So The Music Can Come Out. The Tunes Bring So Much Life To The Dark Sky That Keeps Us Company. The Stage Lights Keeps Track Of Us.
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I Have Erased So Many Nights And Made New Ones That I Will Forget About Once The Sun Introduces Itself. Its Harder Balancing Life Than Balancing My Steps At 4am. God Its Such A Hard Taste To Swallow But Sweet Feelings It Brings To A Smile That Fulls Everyone. It Even Fulls Me With A Numb Night That I Know I Will Go Back To, Like A Crckhead Looking For That Perfect Hit.
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Walking In The Same Circle Over And Over Seeing The Same Colors Ignore Me As They Walk By Me With Confident Smiles Ready To Eat My Soul Alive. I Try My Best To Stay Awake Watch The Reality Come Towards Me, Dont Worry About Me I Can Take Care Of Myself, I Said Yet My Angel Gives Me Survival Knowledge Having Already Met My Ignorant Words. I Have A Saved Spot For Me In The Land Of The Sea Creatures, Hoping My Dry Eyes Dont Infect The Sea I Try My Best Here.
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Her Ignorance Makes Me Sweat But The Work Out Is Worth The Relief She Doesnt Feel. I Battled Her Ignorance With No Fear In My Eyes No Tears Frome My Heart. I Show No Weaknessses Just Present An Ultimatum That Can Hit Me Back. It Was A Successful Battle But An Unknown War Being Faught With Nothing But LOVE.
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Wow...I Love This Poem...I Imagined It Through Out The Entire Thing...It Felt Never Ending At One Point Untill I Got Near The End Of The Piece...Very Powerful Emotions In This Poem...Greate Job!
I Love This Piece...But To Tell You The Truth I Couldnt Read It As A Poem...As I Read On, In My Head It Was A Song...It Just Felt Right To Me...Good Poem
Simple And Very Plain Poem Yet It Helps People Realize The Truth Of Every Single Word...Keep It Up!
This Is A Greate Piece...Really Greate Piece...I Love How It Took Me Frome Time To Time And At The End Just Looking Back In History...It Was Awsome...
Its An Interesting Set Of Lyrics...Im Not Sure Why But Im Not Quite Sure What You Are Talking About...There Was No Picture Evolving In My Head As I Read On...But In A Way My Words Dont Matter Because Once The Tunes Are Added With The Lyrics It Transforms Into A Completely Different World...People Usually Dont Get My Poems Because They Are Full Of Selfishness (Because I Write Just For Myself Not An Audience) So I Guess Now I Know How It Feels To Be Able To Enter A Very Personal Piece (Such As ...
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