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Quotes / Math
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"Math is a language I can't speak fluently."--Sam Eubank
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The windows, my eyes, stained, cracked, shutters ripped wide open, looking out on a world and trying to mend the shutters back together The door, my mouth, dry, gasping for air, trying to speak, but everytime I open the door, someone slams it shut The ventilation, my ears, listening, pulling in the outside air, never knowing what to believe, the whispers heard thoughout the house always decieve There in the center of the house, me looking out the window, opening the door, listening to the out...
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My boyfriend asks who was on the phone, and I tell him that it was just one of my girlfriends from school. In reality it was some cute guy named Rick on his way to Las Vegas to meet me. He’s going to be in for a surprise when he gets here. I’ve got a little secret that nobody knows; not my boyfriend, not even my sisters. When my parents died, I got to watch my sisters beat the hell out of the men responsible for their deaths. My oldest sister Catriana gave me and all of my sisters each a gun...
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Life outside the Bathroom Stall (The answer could be just a phone call away) Once the cops got to the gas station I told them all about what had happened. I told them that the man who caused all of this destruction was Mark Bennet. I gave them the tape from the surveillance camera inside the store so they could review it. They asked for the tape from the camera that was positioned outside, so I gave that to them too. My boss was frantically passing back and forth, answering questions for the ...
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Quotes / No Stoplights
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"And if the light turns red, I'll still keep driving. I'm not afraid of crashing."
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Haiku/Senryu / Cleaning Supplies 4
Hahaha. I love it. That was hilarious. You racist liquid you. I'll never look at a bottle of bleach the same. Great, humurous haiku.
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I like the truth you have in this poem. Though, it's set in the dream world, it seems that people do this in real life. Perhaps, that's how you meant it. I like the "No one is coming to my rescue. Could they do it if they tried." We never seem to want the truth revealed to us so much that we won't believe it. Good work. Great topic.
Short Story / Bang!
The story was okay. You changed the tense in the middle of the story from present to past and I got a little confused..."Is there no way for them to save us?" you said sadly. Perhaps, it was a typo. I think you should express a little more clearly why the "bad" guy made the girl leave the bank with him. It's kind of unclear. Don't most people who go into the bank with a gun come out with money? I suppose the man was testing the girl? Or perhaps you, (God) were testing the girl to see if she w...
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