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AGE: 35
LOC: Richmond, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 15

I am a 33 year old twice published author, living in Richmond, Va.  I write, mainly, about military history from a fictional perspesctive.  My published works are “For God and Country” and “Seven Chiefs”, both available on authorhouse.com and other more well known online bookstores.

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Ryan's advance continued along the coast.  The next targets in front of them were three Type 41 pedestal-mounted 80-mm coastal guns.  The huge swarm of men moved through the palm trees at a rapid pace taking shots from snipers and regulars on the beach.  As they traveled they returned fire at the targets they could make out.  They were making good progress, as little enemy resistance was being offered.  As they approached the guns, shots rang from the beach.  Machine gun fire was being sent i...
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Version 2
3 Reviews   1 Comment
Ryan's advance continued along the coast.  The next targets in front of them were three Type 41 pedestal-mounted 80-mm coastal guns.  The huge swarm of men moved through the palm trees at a rapid pace taking shots from snipers and regulars on the beach.  As they traveled they returned fire at the targets they could make out.  They were making good progress, as little enemy resistance was being offered.  As they approached the guns, shots rang from the beach.  Machine gun fire was being sent i...
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13 Reviews   0 Comments
Ryan's advance continued along the coast. The next targets in front of them were three Type 41 pedestal-mounted 80-mm coastal guns. The huge swarm of men moved the palm trees at a rapid pace taking shots from snipers and regulars on the beach. As they traveled they returned fire at the targets they could make out. They were making good progress, as little enemy resistance was being offered. As they approached the guns, shots rang from the beach. Machine gun fire was being sent in their direct...
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Novel Treatments / Seven Chiefs
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7 Reviews   3 Comments
The morning sun woke them, once again, and they were off to home. Traversing the plains landscape, they made it back a half-day quicker than when they had come. Many of the villagers came to greet them on their arrival and, to say the least, Falling Leaves was very pleased at their safe return. "You might as well not unpack." She said, referring to the the Council Fires meeting that was soon to take place. Running Water smirked, knowing that she meant to remind him of his duties to the tribe....
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Novel Treatments / Inside Information continued
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This was my second time reading your work, and each time my appreciation for the story line grows. I write historical fiction, as well, and found that your work does a good job of mixing the necessary facts with fiction to create a believable work.
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Short Story / You Killed Me
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Making of Men (pt. one)
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