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Very nicely put. I had to read it more than once, not because is was hard to understand, but because I wanted to make sure the details were correct. Very Nice Write! Thanks for sharing that!

Not sure what you had before you revised it, I didn't read it then. This was a very, very interesting piece of work, but it seem like it was wriiten directly for the author. It was a little hard to follow, but I encourage anyone to continue writing. Write on, and help keep writing alive!

I would love to read your short story, the only problem is I can't read spanish. I just did a book of short stories with a couple people that I know and it came out really well. I would love to hook up with some potential writers and do another Anthology. E-mail me back if you are interested. We can also get you o translate the book in your language. Let me know either way.

There is a lot of direction this story was going. I'm not really sure what King actually died and which death actually took place. I really couldn't follow the story sorry. But I respect anyone who take the time to write and let others read it. Keep writing.

I think you are a really good writer, and I think your story line is some what unique. It got really confusing from time to time wasn't sure if you were writing one letter, writing in a journal, or just narrating the story. When a reader read they love to put themselves into the character. While reading your passage it was a little hard to get into the character. But I think it is a good write. Continue!