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My name is Debby and I have been writing poetry most of my life. I’m 51 and Mother of six girls and soon to be Grand Mother of 5. I love structured poetry and most has a message of some kind.
     Enjoy life and strive to improve and
learn each day. Take care and God bless
                              Debby

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Poetry / My Heart
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My Heart You are the world to me, we both just seem to fit. The love we share is just about as good as it gets. I never felt complete or could seem to find my way. I stumbled through life never feeling whole in anyway . Until the day I met you and my life became complete. You opened a new world to me and laid it at my feet. How can I ever thank you for all you’ve been to me. You are my inspiration, your love has set me free. Your always in my mind no matter what I do. You are the ve...
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Poetry / The Ghost Of Love
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The Ghost Of Love Author: Debra_Edwards Word count: 157 The Ghost of Love Love has a shadow, A ghost you could say. It follows and stalks you each night and day. Forget if you can repent if you must. It’s a taunting thing you cannot trust. Tortured by memories… Of beautiful things. You’ll soon hate it and the tears it brings. Dreams as cold fingers clutching your heart. Or the glimpse of your face there in the dark. Memories like that of a specter’s touch. ...
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Poetry / Night
by oknapp
This was an engaging read. That said it needs some form and structure to give it a flow and to make it more pleasing to the eye. I would suggest that you break it up into stanzas, four or five. Then run it through a grammar and punctuation program. The content of the piece is quite good, and well worth the time to clean it up.
Poetry / 11th Day of Summer's End
by jebozid
I emotion in this piece was stunning and brought tears to my eyes as I read your words. I know I will never forget Nine/Eleven as I am sure many of us won't. So many sad stories tales of loss but you're s One of the more touching and heartbreaking. My favorite line: Last synchronous I-love-you still echoes across the land Our dust-coated hands remain forever attached Out standing work.
Poetry / Croatian Roulette
by jebozid
I enjoyed reading this piece The analogy between the roulette wheel and fate are good as well as the mixture of rhyme and free-verse. I would However watch the structure and alignment of you're writes.Grammar and Punctuation are always a plus. Debby
Poetry / On This Day
by VoicesInMyHead
This sounds like a tribute to Martin Luther King jr. It is well done but on a personal note I am not a big fan of repetition. Still it was fitting and well said. Debby
Poetry / Love On The Run
by VoicesInMyHead
I think this is rather a cowardly piece and somewhat pathetic in nature. If you are not willing to stand and speak whats on your mind then I am sure she is just as happy she was not forced to make that choice. Debby
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