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AGE:
18
LOC: Scranton, AR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 25
LOC: Scranton, AR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 25
Oh, oops, I forgot to make a profile…well, just so you know, I’m very forgetful (obviously). I’m unpredictable, slow to anger, slow to forgive. The things that make me maddest is the world today and how overly sexual everything is. I mean, come on! There are so many more things in life! Has anybody not noticed? Am I the only one who realizes you can live with out perversion or sleeping with someone everynight? Also, I have a deep seated hatred of extreme hypocrites, though we all dabble in hypocracy sometimes. I’m usually a good speller; spell it once, spell it always, that’s how I am. I hate grammar period, but I hate bad grammar more. I love musik; it’s my life. Piano, strings (my favourites)...I don’t care fo…
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A young boy walks away from a young girl and turns to another to love she's not good enough for him but he won't open his eyes for he knows the girl he walked away from is dead inside *He could have loved her instead of another he could have held her instead of snubbed her but he was pressured into loving another pressured into love A young girl sit and waits for a young boy and stands up as he takes her hand she is good enough for him though he always tells her that she could do better than ...
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I expected better of you, I really did. And though I've heard "Judge not lest ye be judged" more times than I can count, here is my judgement: You're shallow and empty. You're colder than... well, I could say "ice", but that's been said before, (so cliche) so I'll tell you, I'll judge you, colder than absolute zero. (Your heart is an absolute zero) but more than that, you're sarcastic and vain, (both are traits of the weak). You care about no-one, (and I think you're a homo). Excuse my coarse...
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Ask me my name. Just ask and I'll tell you. My first name is honesty, kindness, and truth; it tells you I'm genuine and smart for my youth. It explains my curiosity, innocence, and smile. This name calls me bright, and incapable of guile. My middle screams wisdom I'll get when I grow. It accuses me of grandeuer, elegance, and show. It summarizes maturity, womanhood, and strenghth. It's Christianity steeped, telling me it's God I should thank. But my last is unworthy, full of sin and decay. I ...
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Just laugh at me. It's okay. I mean, since when did I have feelings? Right? I mean, I've said it a million times. My heart is just a frozen block of ice. I don't believe in love. I also don't believe that anyone here could change my mind. Or anywhere else. But who cares? It's just me, it's just me, right? And I don't care. I don't care about you or myself, though my nature compels me to at least CARE FOR you, because otherwise I'll feel guilty. So it's all in self interest, really.
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I found a needle. I found a needle on the road. I picked it up. I picked it up and took it home. It was pretty. It was pretty and so sharp that I grabbed it. I grabbed and plunged it in my heart. Then I screamed. I screamed and bled through all the pain, but He found me. He found me and took the blame. Then He held me. He held me and pulled it out because of love, because love's what He's about. Love for all, not just me, had done the deed, and He's a saviour. He's a saviour from a need. A ne...
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This is hillarious. The title makes it sound like you were delirious from the e. coli. when you wrote it, so it gives the poem more reality. Check out how it sounds when you say it, though, and maybe fill out some lines. good job.
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The last line needs to be filled out with a few more syllables just to make it flow better. Otherwise, good job.
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I like Bush, but this is a very well-written limerick. The use of intentions, elections, and expectations, to rhyme is not common. Good job on rhyming big words instead of small ones. I like it.
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The second and third line are so good. Especially the way you express how people leave flowers for their dead. The description of the machines is excellent too, but what machines are you talking about? Computers, and the screens their one eye? "Armored veil" is an interesting description. Normally veils are delicate, but that phrase serves two purposes. Hidden and protected. Good job!
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