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AGE:
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LOC: Adelanto, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 15
LOC: Adelanto, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 15
Hello my name is Emma. These poems you see are my first because I never knew I had it in me to write. I was born in Los Angeles, California but my mother moved us to Compton, California were I live for 30 years until this last two years I have lived in Lucerne Valley, California and Adelanto, California so far I do enjoy my new residented. I have a new love slowly that is poems because I read my husband poem at time they make laugh but sometimes I do cry but he has not saw the tears fall yet. This is just a short profile of who I am and where I come from.
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I see people walking down the street everyday and everynight. Those people you'll like to meet.I see those people that plays citizens in the day, but thief in the night. You know those people you said goodmorning too, that took your two dollar shoes. Those people that sat in your livingroom kicking it in the day, but stole your life away. You know those people you inviting into your life. Those people you call friends in their face then realize that they also took your life away.
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Life can be the shit or life can be a bitch it all of what you make of it. Life what do we do with it? How do we handle it? To express life is not a easy one but a difficult task. The decision to get out of bed is God, but to make a choice is yours. Life oh how I love it. What would I do if I did have it? I couldn’t smell the sweet flowers, or listen to the birds sing. So life I need you right here right now as near as possible life how I love you.
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Not a criteria but a great short story. I would say that you need to short the chapters to keep the readers attention. This is not horror to me but people do have there opinon on horror. Other than this I would give a 100% of a short story. I will say to you is to keep up all the good work.
I am not the one to be a criteria but this was a wonderful piece. I belive you should keep up the great work and write more like this.
This is long but very nice piece so far continue the good work. I really enjoy what you had to say here. Do more of this and you will make it big.
This is long but very nice piece so far continue the good work. I really enjoy what you had to say here. Do more of this and you will make it big.
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