dissipatingsoul's profile
AGE:
23
LOC: Naugatuck, CT
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 22
LOC: Naugatuck, CT
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 22
I -suck.- Metaphorically speaking, of course.
Well I guess I’ll type some sort of profile. I’m 20, soon to be 21. Just now getting into college because I was a dumbass and dropped out when I was 16 (Funny how four years can give you so much perspective on a bad life choice, isn’t it?) and I just recently got my G.E.D.
I’m actually fairly smart, I like to think, but lazy due to lack of motivation most of the time. Few things motivate me, one of them being love (I’m a romantic, so sue me) and I’m -terrible- with luck in love.
I have pretty low self-confidence, a decent sense of honor, and I like to think myself as pretty honest, both in emotions and in everything else. I’m also a very empathetic person, once I know you for more t…
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Emotions accurately translated into words.. Challenging.
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Creativity comes in waves, not currents.
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It's funny how you can lie to yourself and convince yourself of something, even though deep down a part of you realizes the truth. I thought I was over you, yet now, as before, I realize I'm still as crazy about you as I was when I first found out just how I felt. Tonight we were outside, you said you were cold, so I offered my coat and you asked me if I was cold I said no, and you took my coat. The second I took the coat off I began shivering, and I had to concentrate on making you not reali...
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Was it over before it began? Did it ever truly start? It didn't have a chance. Went from nothing to broken heart. A void into a corpse. Death into abyss. Love into apathy. Hit into a miss. If only there was a second. Time for one more chance. But would you give it? Just one more dance? If only life were easy. If all things could be fair. I'd still be against you. Face buried in your hair. Love is like a song. If it's good, you listen again and again. And if it's bad, then it's over. Before it...
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On the road to the end I find nothing but the dark side of people and my own emotions. It's teeming with the dark horrors of the human race; depression, anger, hate, and desire for violence. The light side has become so alien to me I don't think I'd recognize it if I were drowning in it. Without an idea of what it is I yearn for how could I ever possibly achieve the goal? I lie awake at night and fantasize of what could be, what could've been, or, what could never be. And yet I'm stuck in the...
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Short but sweet. Conveys the message it's meant to. I really like the last two lines "You never know I may be the one" That's the thing about love isn't it? You never do know. Nice job.
Wow, I really liked this piece. The relationship depicted in the poem really reminds me of one of mine... she will never let me in. i can not call out to her. i’m a sponge for her lies, absorbing them to the bone. That part especially I can connect with... excellent job.
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I can relate to this completely, I was actually in a similar situation until recently when I told her. Well... as for the outcome, the last line depicts that well. Anyway, nice piece, I hope your situation works itself out better than mine did.
Another great piece; I think I'm adding you to my favorites, heh. Although I did like the first one slightly better because it seemed to be have more vivid images, this one is still really good. Reading all this is almost like reading a list of things I want, and some things you wrote, even if I never thought about before, reading them described as you do makes me want them. Excellent piece, I look forward to many more.
This writing is something I can easily relate to. Most people I imagine could, I know I constantly find myself thinking about things I want, things that could be, and music is often a cause of this thinking, and can often even take me into a somewhat surreal world, which is entirely manipulated by the music. All in all I really enjoyed reading this, and as the first non-fiction piece I've reviewed... well, any future ones have a high standard to meet for me now.
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