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AGE:
24
LOC: Mosier, OR
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 26
LOC: Mosier, OR
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 26
Writing is my passion, I love to read and I enjoy the travel of military life.
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Chill night winds blew through the drafty house penetrating every small crack as an expeditionary force. Dark shadows played twisted games with street lamps in the dead hours of night. The house was a rather old structure built in the fifties retaining much of that era's art deco styling's within its shingle-sided exterior ruffling slightly in the wind from the second story to its foundation. A muffled light shone through a window at the rear of the house. Inside, surrounded by glorious achie...
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The letter began very...appealing. However, this is a rather cynical letter and one more slanderous than I believe it should be. The best thing about an argument is your views and his. Another point I would like to examine with you is the mention of slavery so prevalent in this letter. I believe your readership understands the parallel you have institutionalized as a running argumentative theme within the letter. However, I urge you to cap this argument the first time. Sum it up in such a way...
This is a good story. I'm not sure if I agree with the glamorization of a rapist and his side-kick. I mean, thats pretty weird. However, the story was very well written. Good job.
Very well written and thought out. The plot line and the actual story merged into one cohesive idea.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
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