dragonheart's profile

AGE: 32
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 19

I am an aspiring writer who is looking to get his foot in the door of the writing world. I, also, write poetry that I have submitted into poetry contests and have received the editor’s choice award for them. I am currrently blogging a story on myspace.com and would love for people to read and give me a push in the right direction. Here is the site:
http://blog.myspace.com/dragonheart2006
You will have to start with the blog that is titled “the beginning”. I know I didn’t capitalize the proper words, but that is not the final draft that I would submit to a publisher.

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Version 1

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Mother's love is sweet and pure. Mothers have the cure For every ailment. Mothers commit To raising their kids. Mothers forbids Us to do wrong For we belong To our mothers for eternity. Mother's compassion is never-ending. Mother's sympathize with us. Mother's are the world's greatest listeners For our imagination Can come up with a lot of things. Mother's teachings are strict and proper, But is there to guide us Along the right path. Mother's touch is soft and gentle. Mother's touch helps to...

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Version 3

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In the beginning, there was a very lonely king who was always grumpy. The subjects would meet the king's quota of various supplies daily and even bring in extra as well to try to please the king, but no matter what they did it just wasn't good enough. They tried throwing parties and bring him prostitutes off the streets, but his mood just would not change. Until one day a beautiful young lady waltzed into the palace to plead with the king to spare her family's land. The king is currently hav...

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Version 2

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In the beginning, there was this very lonely king who was always grumpy with his loyal subjects. The subjects would meet the king's quota daily and even bring in extra as well to try to please the king, but no matter what they did it just wasn't good enough. They tried throwing parties and bring him prostitutes off the streets, but his mood just would not change. Until one day this beautiful young lady comes waltzing into the palace to beg the king to spare her family's land. The king was cu...

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