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AGE: 22
LOC: Columbus, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 20

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Short Story / Empty Vessels
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The tall, expressionless man that always sleeps against the vine covered brick wall in front of the cemetery decides to go to the beach today. He settles himself at the end of a long weathered dock. Haze hovers lazily over the water and the early morning air smells of rotting fish and sea salt. It is grey and overcast, the spectrum of color limited to that of an old faded photograph that has been over handled and has lost the picture of vivacity it once had. The tall man had come here hoping ...
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Poetry / letter to Kimmy
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Poetry / The Poet
Ok, so I read the first stanza and was kind of like, "ugh another one of THESE poems..." but I continued reading and ended up loving it. I loved the references to other authors and poets inside the poem. Also, the nevermore was nice. It was a good circle back to the mentioning of a Poe work. That being said, I would work on the first stanza. It does not match up to the rest of the poem and almost steered me away from it.
Poetry / You said...
I think this poem is adorable and simple. But not simple in a bad way. It's simplicity is what makes it appealing. It seems so light and innocent. I especially like the first and last verse. I think the middle one needs a bit of work to match the other two in cleverness.
Lyrics / The Third Wheel
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Short Story / Once Upon A Txt Msg
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