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LOC: Totowa, NJ
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LOC: Totowa, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 01
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Iv’e written a book for those interested in improving their health in a real and natural way. It’s a practical how-to guide that provides readers of almost any age or background with solid, proven scientific facts about health in an easily understandable manner. The book addresses many common health care myths and reveals five secret keys to health that will virtually guarantee more resistance to disease and a longer, happier and healthier life:
“The health craze is still upon us, and this new age of concern for health, wellness and prevention is well addressed by the chapters in this book. Many are fed up with the lies of traditional medicine, are looking for something better. There is something better. There are many choices in…
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Chapter 2 Is there more to you than just you? Or: Belief- Faith- Science? “Prayer is not asking, it is admission of one’s weakness, and so it is better in prayer to have a heart without words, than words without a heart.” Gandhi Back to Paterson, New Jersey. My experience in the health care system started young. As a patient who was very sick. I was born healthy and normal. But like all too many infants these days, after a vaccination I developed serious symptoms. In my case it was the polio ...
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Innate The power that made the body, heals the body, There is no other way. I’ve seen the knife, watched it cut, Heard the lies to justify their way. But then I also saw the miracles, That Innate performs each day. I’ve seen the drugs suppress the symptoms, And in all of their disgrace, Man assumes the drugs would benefit, And assumed healing would take place. But I know it is not drugs, or surgery, That will heal the human race. When all else fails and there’s nothing left, For modern man t...
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This piece is fair overall. I liked it personally, but it only fits half the category. Satire. It was not funny enough to make me laugh. And it also lacked a good punch at the end. I was a bit predictable. For all its short-comings, I gave it a high overall rating, but that's because I don't like asians. (Ha, just kidding) good job, keep at it.
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Not REAL bad, but, being in the Humor/satire category, it lacks both... I did not see the satire, and I did not laugh, sorry. I sympathize with the plight of the author, but because it is in this category, I must take away marks for lack of satire, and lack of punch-line. It has potential. Please re-work it to fit the category, or just move it to another category where it will get a better review, I'm sure. Good luck.
Very nice. What happened with the break in the middle? Was that a computer "Copy/paste" glitch? Otherwise it works well and (would have) flowed smoothly. It's real basic and a bit "young-ish", but certainly has it place in children poetry. good job overall.
Just OK. It is written fair enough, but, I think the main problem is the category in which you placed it. I did not see any humor or satire. Placed in another category, I would probably give it a higher rating.
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