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Icelandic music and travelling.

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I have never met a book that didn’t influence my thinking, and imaginative literature is no exception. Haruki Murakami’s “Kafka on the Shore” embodies magical realism in all its glory, juxtaposing the stories of a young runaway named Kafka and a strange old man, Nakata, who has mysteriously lost his intelligence and gained the ability to converse with cats. The novel appealed to my emotions as any well-written story would, but did not shut down my rational faculties. Logic and emotion were li...
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There’s a certain stigma attached to being a writer. People react in a rather predictable way when I express my passion for writing. Responses tend to fall into three categories: pity (“Oh, you’re suicidal!”), cynicism (“You pseudo-intellectual, what do you know?”), or sheer confusion (“You write…for fun?”). Though I’m a far cry from Sylvia Plath, I am prone to mood swings and periods of withdrawal. Writing takes soul-searching and contemplation, and I occasionally get caught up in a whirlwin...
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There’s a certain stigma attached to being a writer. People react in a rather predictable way when I express my passion for writing. Responses tend to fall into three categories: pity (“Oh, you’re suicidal!”), cynicism (“You pseudo-intellectual, what do you know?”), or sheer confusion (“You write…for fun?”). Though I’m a far cry from Sylvia Plath, I am prone to mood swings and periods of withdrawal. Writing takes soul-searching and contemplation, and I occasionally get caught up in a whirlwin...
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Short Story / Wheels
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He pedaled through the alleyways covered in soot. His breathing, heavy yet wistful, seemed to filter through the accumulated grime. His feet pressed roughly against each pedal—down, and up, down, and up again—working through the motions with ease; a mere observer would see an ordinary man trying to ride alongside life, but one with omniscience would know that he had been on his feet all day. This man didn’t, couldn’t, stride when he could push. “It’s almost eight. Kathy and the kids are exp...
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Short Story / Midlife Crisis
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It’s the coldest day of the year. Dipping into the low 30s, you muster strength to yank the sheets off your pale, disheveled figure. Sleepy. You knock over the alarm. Goddamn noise. It’s a universal sound, also the most dissonant you could possibly ask for at the moment. George is working an early shift today; his figure is still embedded in the antique mattress. The kids still have another hour of warmth. You envy them until you remember the unremitting dread of going to high school. Pushing...
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You won me by the title. I really liked this. It reminds me of a Regina Spektor song, "That Time," in which she compares different phases of her life to the cigarettes she smoked. Overall it was touching, nostalgic, and easy to relate to. If possible, it would have been even more interesting if you had written about every month in the year. Anyway, good work and keep it up!
Short Story / Stolen
The first things I couldn't help from noticing were the spelling and grammatical errors here and there. Buy some come? You mean coke? This might just be a rough draft, but proof-reading matters--the first few lines matter. Overall the story is awkward and not incredibly moving, but it does have potential. I think you could have developed your characters more, particularly the narrator. The dialogue between Benny and the narrator is awkward, too. Even though you probably were intending for it ...
This is an important issue, especially in college, where the statistics that 1 in 4 girls on campus will be sexually abused. As great as it is that it's been addressed here, I can only imagine how I would respond to it if I were to pick up the paper and find this article in my school paper. I would probably skim through it, then move on. The first problem begins with your first paragraph, where you actually outline exactly what you are going to say - which might actually offend your reader. A...
Journalism / The Unforgivable Crime
Wow, that sucks. The situation, not the piece (which is excellent, by the way). The title lured me in and I was not disappointed. The line about dead bodies under the floorboard made me think about John Wayne Gracy, Jr. Really, the only aspect of this otherwise fantastic piece is that darned smiley face. I love the biting, satirical tone, your hilarious characterization of the Danish gov't, and especially the sentence that begins with "I dated the hopeless"...it's wonderful. Great job and I h...
The Myanmar situation is a highly relevant, emotional issue and I'm glad it was addressed. The beginning felt promising. You opened with a great quote and an engaging first paragraph. However, the last paragraph belittles the reader by combining a whole lot of cliches about caring for one another. Though you make a good point, the last few sentences feel recycled and stale. You don't need to be so obvious in your intent; the situation speaks for itself. It would be helpful for you to provide ...
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