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AGE: 50
LOC: Hillman, MN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 20

MN cowgirl rancher and poet.  That’s about all I write is cowboy poetry.  I am looking to make acquaintances on Urbis, who can give some honest feedback on my work.  My user name is dtribitt and I extend an invitation to have you join me on Urbis.

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I was a cowboy’s darling and Queen of the rodeo I’d wear my crown in every town Turning. Burning. Try’n’ to make short-go. But on Friday nights when they dimmed the lights We would dance the whole night through It’s so fun to be the one polishin’ buckles with you Chorus: We’d Docey-Doe and Stonewall We’d Texas Two-Step to “You and Me.” Some Slappin’ Leather and Cha Cha would warm us up for the Tumbleweed We’d Swing and we would Hustle; and then we’d dance the Longhorn Special Dance, cowboy. D...
Version 1
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I was a cowboy’s darling and Queen of the rodeo I’d wear my crown in every town Turning. Burning. Try’n’ to make short-go. But on Friday nights when they dimmed the lights We would dance the whole night through It’s so fun to be the one polishin’ buckles with you Chorus: We’d Docey-Doe and Stonewall We’d Texas Two-Step to “You and Me.” Some Slappin’ Leather and Cha Cha would warm us up for the Tumbleweed We’d Swing and we would Hustle; and then we’d dance the Longhorn Special Dance, cowboy. D...
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Poetry / MEMORIES
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Memories are all I have left to keep me going on. The sun rises and sets each day not knowing you are gone. I ride the ranch in quiet thought and watch the wind blow by. With a heavy heart I listen and hear its lonesome cry. Is it calling you like I am, wandering everywhere, searching in vain & confusion not getting anywhere? Is it yearning for you, darling, as I do all day long, trying to capture your laughter to add to its lonesome song? Is it longing to embrace you as it whispers your name...
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Version 1
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A COWBOY FAREWELL The mountains are covered in blankets of snow. Don’t reckon I’ll be ‘round to see you this spring. The owl has been callin’ from way over yonder, now he sits by my window and I know what he brings… My cowboyin’ days, they were truly amazing Found life before death in the clear mountain air Now I’m ready to wander new pastures up yonder And I’m ready to ride the four winds that blow there. I’ve rode all the rank ones – down to my last run. I’ve bulldogged the devil in three s...
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Novel Treatments / Pytheas Chapter III
This sounds like it could be a very interesting read. I like stories that are fast moving and a bit more personal, but like I said, it is an interesting story. I stumbled a bit over... “In the Council yesterday, I had to make my case to the Council so that I would be assured a place aboard ship. The Council"....too much "Council" so maybe you could change that up a bit. It also seems like you probably had to do a lot of background research for this story or have the knowledge on this type of ...
lots of insight, hopefully not hind-sight! I think we all know someone in this situation, but it's hard to figure what they're thinking. You did that part for us. I like it.
Poetry / I Am
very intriguing thoughts, although i stumbled on "down downtown"
Poetry / A Precious Few
lots of truth without lots of words.
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